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TWHoC: Chapter 11 - Useless Piece of...

🕑 Added 2023-08-30 05:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Aclys

For what it is worth, I am enjoying the story more and more as the gears keep turning. Yes the plot is a little obvious from our perspective but this is not necessarily a bad thing. The stage is being ser for Bek's quest and there is plenty of mysteries to look into, like why is the temple so happy to topple this kingdom? Given that the dawngirl prophecy was theirs to begin with. Will also be fun to see when the oracle realises what a dud of a prince she is getting herself tied to in a kingdom that is doomed by her actions...

Wesley Stone

I don't know how I feel about this story... At the moment I feel a lot of the outcomes are just to obvious and If Bek's doesn't break her engagement with Luther and leave with her family in the next month, I maybe dropping it. Which is too bad because I really enjoy your writing overall.


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