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TWHoC: Chapter 13 - You Really Dodged an Arrow

🕑 Added 2023-09-06 05:00:03 +0000 UTC

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David Hall

Eh. I mean, I’m not saying you’re wrong, but it’s worth considering that Beks basically grew up around them, & while she’s wasn’t the biggest fan, this is a LOT of betrayal. Not only of Beks, but of the late Queen’s wishes (who he supposedly loved). Also, bear in mind that a lot of the more dastardly moments that we’ve read didn’t happen in front of Beks or her family. She has no idea that the Consort has been plotting with the Oracle this whole time, so this just seems like opportunism. Since her assumption was that they wanted her locked in a tower slaving away at admin, she had no reason to think that they’d already worked to frame her family for the abduction. Basically, she knows that she’s smarter than they are, but doesn’t realize how much they already have prepared, so she’s caught off guard. Just my interpretation

“You are a jealous, self-centered woman who only wants power.” - actually, that’s your OTHER wife, your majesty. Oooh boy. Now we’re getting into the fun stuff…

Quarky

This tale is tough for me to get into, and it's the main character and her allies that I hate. Early on, the Third Consort could have stabbed one of them in the face, and they would die wondering if they got lost in the wilderness. "Two of my brothers have gone missing, making my youngest half-brother the heir? Must be these damn uppity bandits killing all the royalty! Those dastardly no-good rascals!"Then the Third Consort locks them in a tower, and these people that are ostensibly trained in both history and politics do nothing and don't expect that the Third Consort will solidify his power base. AND THEN the Third Consort SO UNEXPECTEDLY moves to solidify his power base, and the main character and her family are just like "Welp, guess I'll die. What can you do?" The plot armor of the antagonist is just... too much.


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