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Winning Vote - Winter Retreat!
🕑 Added 2018-01-10 18:04:40 +0000 UTCHi guys!
Votes are in, and the winning sketch by a country mile is Winter Retreat! The number of votes were as follows:
- Winter Retreat - 94
- Stud Con - 51
- In a Rush - 28
- Just the Tip - 15
In an effort to improve the image, I'll be rendering it in full colour, but I'll also make slight changes to any anatomical problems I can find. In this arena, I'm happy to hear any constructive critique you can offer! I've so far enlarged Ciaran's head as it was a little small, and removed his 'wandering scrotal sac' which was pointed out as being too far back ;). Two things I'm considering: adjusting his arm position so that there's less awkward overlap with his hip/thigh. The second would be to just slightly adjust the line of his spine so it's in line with the angle of his hips/ground plane.
If you have thoughts, critiques or redlines, please feel free to download the png and doodle all over it or just tell me in a comment <3
Thanks everyone for voting!
Comments
I see what you mean, even then i feel like the knee would stick out a bit
Vallahd
Looking at the picture for anatomical details... Where does Runa's (assuming it's the girl) right leg go? It kinda just disappears once it goes behind Claran. I'm not sure if she just folds it up enough that it lines up perfectly with him from this angle, but that's what I can see thus far.
Demicoeur
LOL more pussy detail coming right up! XD
Volpethrope
The only other anatomical nitpick I can come up with might be lowering his angle of penetration a little so more of the top of her vulva is visible, instead of the entire thing being squished inwards by his penis. You don't really do this as far as I can recall, but a lot of artists draw the vulva like inside the labia and immediately below the clitoris is just a gaping hole, so you'll see penetration shots with the dick bordering the clit. Basically... let's see some more pussy detail! ;D I think everything else about the anatomy and pose works.
