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A Fall in the City - Chapter 21

🕑 Added 2024-08-20 10:00:01 +0000 UTC

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syrus80

These two are so passionate and meant for each other. I guess we have to wait for them to finally just say that to each other!

memo2dt

I too wanted them to have an actual conversation and get things sorted. I've always thought erotic stories should be as close to what actually happens in real life instead of following the sexual formula that so many follow. For example when Blake almost demanded Joe fuck him, I think that's what should have happened instead of the licking and sucking. Sometimes people just want to get down to business or it's not always practical nor required. I possibly see Zaid walking in and seeing Joe balls deep inside of Blake in almost the exact same spot that Joe had fucked him. I'm not necessarily saying I don't want them to get back together. But what I am saying is that Blake should make Joe work for it and not give himself so freely to a man who has basically ghosted him.

Devin

What a great chapter! Just like the good old days. I really wanted them to actually have that conversation. I wanted them both to admit their feelings and make a plan to be together. The passion just radiates off these two, and yes, even though the sex is hotter than hell, you can see something deeper. I’m excited and nervous which way you turn this. I could have a huge smile on my face or literally be crying. Thanks for an amazing chapter Thomas.


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