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A Fall in the City - Chapter 06

🕑 Added 2024-05-07 10:00:02 +0000 UTC

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thomas lodge

Thanks a lot for this, i've just corrected it!

Chole

I think it should be "or" instead of "of" on this line "I wondered if he had managed to do that himself of if Olivia had taken care of his genitals"

Timmy Watkins

With all of this tension between Blake and Olivia including Joe being so nervous around the two because of his attraction to Blake, I wonder how things are going to go when James the gay friend from London comes to visit Olivia… :)

thomas lodge

Guys, I will always leave the comments section open, and therefore, always receive criticism. One thing I will say though is that no matter what I do, the direction that I take with my stories, there will always be some people who would have wished for a different outcome. Unfortunately, it is often the people who are unsatisfied who speak the loudest... Honestly, sometimes, it can be a bit difficult to pour my energy into these books and receive feedback of people who are basically disappointed. But eh, I cannot write to please everyone. I can only write what I feel like is the proper direction for my characters. Also, remember that those are not short stories but complete books, meaning that sometimes, you have to trust the process. It's chapter 6 of a 24 chapters book here, we're barely discovering the new characters. Another point is that: all books are not for everyone. You could love one of my stories, and dislike the other one. That would make sense actually and I am fine with that. What you cannot expect is for me to deliver exactly what you would expect at every single chapter. First of all, because everyone expects something different out of each story meaning that it is simply impossible, second of all, I have to respect my own creativity. Sometimes the stories do not go the way you were expecting and it is totally on purpose. As you have probably all noticed, I do love the twists and turns, and I have never been a fan of the stories following a defined pattern until the happy ending (although I understand this is a reassuring read for the readers, that's just not my style). I leave myself some possibilities for future stories and spin-offs. Other than that, I try to close all the storylines I open before the end of each book. I am clearly an amateur writer, doing my best, and to provide 3 to 4 full-length chapters per week and 7 entire books per year, trust me, it is a lot of work. See, I have to construct the entire book (often between 250 and 400 pages) to make sure the whole story is consistent (planting easter eggs, developping characters), and only then, construct every chapter individually, not talking about the time I spend managing this page. I am doing the best that I can but I cannot try to please everyone, it would simply drive me insane. (For real, tho! ahah) For example, I know that I took risks with the recent chapters of The Bully but this is just how the story was supposed to go in my mind and I could not betray that. The shocks, surprises, twists and turns are part of the journey. Finally, including erotism while keeping the story consistent is ALWAYS the biggest challenge. From times to times now, I allow myself not to include erotiscm in some of the chapters. This is the only way I have found to remain creative and to keep enjoying writing. Although, to be fair, since the verry beginning (my first story: My First Year in College), there were very few actual sex scenes and instead a few scenes of light erotism in many chapters. That being said, thanks to everyone supporting my work. :)

Christopher Brown

You might be referring to me. NGL when Joe's just telling the story he's fine as a character. I don't retract my earlier judgment of him as being a mental ostrich, but he's a lot less determinedly up his own ass here. I'd love to see how Fran/"Lova" shakes up this triangle (and how Olivia continues to estrange Blake from her). As far as Joe dressing Blake, not EVERY chapter of an ongoing, day-to-day story can have just hot, steamy sex, or even needs it.

Devin

Not enough. Such a great story. It seams Olivia and Blake aren’t doing so well…..and it’s only been a week. I still think she met someone in London. When time got closer to coming home, she broke it off with him and started getting homesick for Blake. But now home for a couple of weeks, maybe she’s rethinking how much she misses him and London. As always, can’t wait to see where this goes.

Arnold Stone

After Kurtis, Joe is one of my favorite characters, but today's chapter was a big disappointment for me. Meeting an old lady and dressing Blake? That's it? My initial enthusiasm for The Bully unfortunately waned and ended after the coach was killed. And now Fall in the City! Someone wrote earlier that Joe's point of view is not interesting enough. I didn't agree with him then, but now I'm starting to believe he was right.


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