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A Fall in the City - Chapter 10

🕑 Added 2024-06-04 10:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Arnold Stone

I thought of the woman-loving Italian director Tinto Brass, who in his many films and in his personal life represented the view that adventures can rather strengthen a relationship in crisis, because the partners are often strengthened in the feeling that the "cheated" partner is the real. Blake and Joe didn't promise each other anything, they're not deceiving each other, they're deceiving Liv.

memo2dt

It blows my mind that people want to see Blake and Joe together but still want him to continue hooking up with random guys. Think about how Blake is going to feel when he finds out the amount of guys Joe has been with. At this point, I'd almost like to see Liv finding out and breaking up with Blake and the both of them go no contact with Joe.

thomas lodge

Yes! Good catch!

Noah

Griffin as in griffin from my first year in prison

syrus80

It’s building towards a breaking point. I feel sad for all of them. It’ll be a long road for Olivia to forgive them once she finds out about the affair.

JLinhares

Really really hoping Joe and Blake end up together. Would really suck to just see them drift apart.

Devin

Really disappointed in this chapter. I have been hoping that Joe’s and Blake’s relationship would be rebuilt and Blake and Olivia would end things. I don’t think there was one thing I liked and when Blake and Joe spoke in the end, I wanted to throw up. Sorry Thomas. But I want to be real.

Chole

That talking with Blake is making me think he's gonna break up with Olivia soon. He doesn't feel so sure about her any more. Who will be? After being fuck by that dick. I feel, next chapter will bring a lot of drama on the table.

Arnold Stone

It was a good chapter, a lot of sex, a lot of internal struggle: I felt Blake's situation perfectly. "Aside from Blake, I never considered being fucked by anyone else though." Well, I hope he will changes his mind about this soon. :)


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