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A Fall in the City - Chapter 18

🕑 Added 2024-07-30 10:00:02 +0000 UTC

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Arnold Stone

I can understand Joe. He feels totally guilty. After all, as a father, he consciously seduced his daughter's boyfriend. It's okay that Blake was open to this relationship, but Joe was clearly the initiator. I have deep respect for Thomas's talent for the depths and heights he takes this story through. It started out as light erotic play, then deepened into romantic love, and then appeared the dramatic elements, the culmination of which was fire. I think that in the midst of his sexual adventures, Joe will find himself in a dangerous or humiliating situation where Blake is clearly the way out, and then they will be able to sort out their relationship. I can also imagine Olivia helping with this, since she loves her father and isn't mad at Blake, but she has remorse over the fire.

syrus80

I hope Eric keeps his mouth shut about what he sees. Olivia is still traumatized. Still not a fan of Joe’s escapades but I’ll see the story through to the end.

Arnold Stone

I expected this, but Thomas reads my thoughts, so he came up with a different surprise. :)

Timmy Watkins

Imagine if it was Blake and not Eric that walked into the sauna… :)


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