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A Fall in the City - Chapter 19

🕑 Added 2024-08-06 10:00:01 +0000 UTC
A Fall in the City - Chapter 19

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Devin

Well, sorry my comments are so late. I hated this chapter, and I also loved it. I was getting pretty tired of Joe being a man whore. Asking Erick to come to join the orgy, that was the last straw for me with Joe. But the story changed drastically. I think Erick telling Liv just shows his commitment to her. But I’m also happy Liv has found her own independence. As for Blake being with Zaid, no one said they were physically together. Joe is jumping to conclusions. Now Erick knows the truth about Blake’s and Joe’s relationship. Not sure that’s so great. I knees Fran was going downhill. You could see hints of it in every chapter. I was glad Blake was there to catch him. Joe has a wonderful and honest relationship with Fran. I think they have been good for one another. I wonder what will happen to the castle and the inheritance. The tender moments with Blake I hope will light a fire for both of them. Let’s face it, it their story. And excluding the HOT sex (partly) these two fell deeply in love. I see this totally as a love story. I hope with both Joe’s and Blake’s errors, they will become stronger together.

Alessandro

Thank you for this chapter, it was so nice indeed to see Joe vulnerable and opening up with his daughter. Olivia is the catalyst that I didn't imagine would be for Joe and Blake to get closer once again...and although that they met again because of Fran being sick, i loved that when they met each other, all the months apart just disappeared... "Maybe you two are the real love story after all", man i literally got chills! 🫠


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