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Chapter: 627 - Celebration: Day One

🕑 Added 2025-08-25 12:00:17 +0000 UTC

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NondescriptGamer

I think you're underestimating how much Tala just refuses to think about things that make her sad. "Even the idea of immortality without him… so many others were already drifting away, but to be without her partner? She didn’t want to even consider it. So, she didn’t." She seems to do this a lot, though it's not usually called out. Usually she just distracts herself with another topic.

Ellariayn

I liked this. A lot. (No puns here.). At Tala’s young age, even knowing she’s immortal, I really think she’d take the Zuccat’s retirement much harder and be more aware of her sibling’s kids. I’m older (😭) by a little bit than Tala - even if I knew I was immortal, the Zuccat’s in particular would have been much harder. Maybe nieces/nephews less important (if only because she spent a substantial of very formative time with the Zuccat’s , even as an immortal and she’s still VERY young). I think you are under estimating the importance early relationships and part of immortality would have.

Andrew K

All things considered, I think it's a bit soon for another Black Legion encounter. Taking the working book title into account, I'd guess a sudden early start to the next Leshkin war is more likely.

Kaladin

Well that's not ominous... Odds of the black legion showing up? I'm still iffy on Latna's relationship, but if it's healthy it's fine. Family and friends definitely need to help where one's blindspots may be for relationships. Just because it makes her happy doesn't necessarily mean it's healthy. I think this instance with the limited information we have is fine, but a paragraph or two could paint their relationship in a very different light. Also it's very convenient that Latna the only one in a relationship with an archon has a chance at being one herself. Curious if any of the siblings who are too young to know if they would likely become an archon will make it like Sella. Also wouldn't mind learning their magics. Though this does feel like a turning point in the novel to accelerate timelines and bring forth various plotlines: waning, wars, etc.

Jacob Grosskopf

Tftc


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