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nijima makoto tier2
🕑 Added 2025-10-26 15:35:22 +0000 UTC🇰🇷 í•œêµì–´ (Korean)
니지마 ë§ˆì½”í† ë¦¬í„°ì¹ ìž‘ì—…ìž…ë‹ˆë‹¤.
ê°€ë” ì˜ˆì „ì— ê·¸ë¦° ê·¸ë¦¼ë“¤ì„ ë‹¤ì‹œ ë³´ë©´, 지금 ë´ë„ ê´œì°®ì€ ë¶€ë¶„ë„ ìžˆì§€ë§Œ 형태ì 으로 ëˆˆì— ê±°ìŠ¬ë¦¬ëŠ” ì ë“¤ë„ ê½¤ 많습니다.
ì´ ê·¸ë¦¼ë„ íŠ¹ížˆ ì–¼êµ´ì´ ì „ë°˜ì 으로 길어서 ë§ìƒì²˜ëŸ¼ ë³´ì—¬ 조금 어색했는ë°, ê·¸ ë¶€ë¶„ì„ ìˆ˜ì •í•˜ê³ ë°”ë”” ë¼ì¸ê³¼ ì–‘ê°ë„ 함께 다듬으니 한결 보기 편해졌습니다.
사실 ì•„ì§ ë” ì†ë³´ê³ ì‹¶ì€ ë¶€ë¶„ë“¤ë„ ìžˆê¸´ 합니다만, 어디까지나 ìž ê¹ ì‹œê°„ì„ ë‚´ì„œ 하는 리터ì¹ì´ë¼ 너무 ë§Žì€ ì—너지를 ìŸê¸°ë³´ë‹¤ëŠ” ì 당히 마무리했습니다.
ê·¸ëŸ¬ê³ ë³´ë‹ˆ ì´ ê·¸ë¦¼ì„ ì²˜ìŒ ê·¸ë¦´ 때는 ì•„ì§ íŽ˜ë¥´ì†Œë‚˜ë¥¼ í”Œë ˆì´í•˜ê¸° ì „ì´ì—ˆìŠµë‹ˆë‹¤ë§Œ, 지금 와서 ë³´ë©´ 가네시로 루트ì—ì„œ ë°°ë“œì—”ë”©ì´ ë‚¬ë‹¤ë©´ ë”± ì´ëŸ° ëŠë‚Œìœ¼ë¡œ ë나지 않았ì„까 싶네요.
그럼 여러분들 ì¦ê°í•˜ì‹œê³ ìš”, ê·¸ë¦¬ê³ DOAì˜ ë ˆì´ì¹´ëŠ” ë‚´ì¼ì´ë‚˜ ëª¨ë ˆì¯¤ 완성ë 것 같습니다. ë ˆì´ì¹´ë„ ë§Žì´ ê¸°ëŒ€í•´ 주세요. ê°ì‚¬í•©ë‹ˆë‹¤.
🇺🇸 English
This is a retouching of Makoto Niijima.
Sometimes when I look back at my older works, there are still parts that hold up well, but quite a few areas feel structurally off.
In this piece, the face was especially long, which made her look a bit awkward and horse-faced, so I corrected that part and refined the body line and volume, making it much more pleasant to look at.
There are still more areas I could polish, but since this is just a quick retouch I did in my spare time, I wrapped it up without pouring too much energy into it.
Now that I think about it, I drew this before I had even played Persona, but looking at it now, if her route with Kaneshiro had ended in a bad ending, it might have turned out like this.
Hope you enjoy it! And the DOA character Reika will most likely be finished tomorrow or the day after, so please look forward to her as well. Thank you.
🇨🇳 简体ä¸æ–‡
这是对新岛真（Makoto Niijima）的一次润色é‡ç»˜ã€‚
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想起æ¥è¿™å¼ 图最åˆç»˜åˆ¶çš„时候，我还没开始玩《女神异闻录 Persona》，但现在å†çœ‹ï¼Œå¦‚果在金城线走å‘å结局，大概就是这ç§æ„Ÿè§‰å§ã€‚
希望å„ä½å–œæ¬¢ï¼å¦å¤– DOA 的蕾å¡é¢„计明天或åŽå¤©å®Œæˆï¼Œä¹Ÿè¯·å¤šå¤šæœŸå¾…。谢谢。
🇯🇵 日本語
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