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Next chapters plannings + fixes

🕑 Added 2025-07-19 12:17:29 +0000 UTC

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The third option is actually pretty good... thanks for the idea, I might rework the first/second chapter a bit to add this information. Thanks!

ozg82889

I think the problem isnt that its not a slowburn(most ntr manga arnt slowburn for example) but that Emily acts more like the main girl of a slut story then an ntr/ntrs story. At least from the players perspective she is doing everything unprompted, with no hesitation, and without regard for her boyfriends feelings. Add on the fact that she is doing this with someone she supposedly dislikes and you lose the suspension of disbelief. Adding detailed intimacy between mc and emily wouldn't fix that, it would make it worse. It would make more sense if you made mc tell Emily that he was into ntrs so Emily is just doing that thinking that's what mc would want. Another option would be to reveal that Sabrina told Emily about mc's fetish and showed chats between Emily and Sabrina where Emily showed hesitation/doubt while Sabrina egged her on. A third option is you could make it so that Emily was a massive slut before meeting mc but some event between her and mc caused her to change her ways for him but her high sex drive and how busy mc has been recently could have her return to her old ways and those thoughts are the cause of mc's fetish. There are plenty of ways to keep the current pace while having the story make enough sense that people don't lose that suspension of disbelief.