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Diaper Quest: Next 520

🕑 Added 2022-11-28 17:00:11 +0000 UTC
Diaper Quest: Next 520

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I genuinely think most people, like myself, would never have noticed that moment if you didn't bring it up now. Maybe it was just me who missed the overstepping forest for the diapered trees but I am glad you brought it back. It definitely makes the story more rounded.

Nothing ventured, nothing gained. I don't think ABDL creatives should shy away from difficult moments. Art is art. If you don't stick the landing, you can learn and try again next time. I give you kudos for attempting it and trying to bring some reality and depth and actual humanity to fetish art that most people are just content to ignore.

blarg1

I'm going to guess that Loraile knows because she wasn't asleep, at least not fully.

Which is why I am worried about this whole part, I'm not sure if I can handle it well

You know... I probably- no almost definitely didn't clock it in the moment but Justine kissing her in her sleep was like... Not... Okay... Not in like a bad writing moment, but in like a character flaw that she couldn't control her emotions: Letting them out in the wrong way and burying/not dealing with them.

Abe Sedecim

Please don't tell me it was that Owl. I know there supposed to be very observant, but he can barely see straight.


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