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Dalvir's Divergence - Episode II: Restructuring
🕑 Added 2021-04-09 04:27:59 +0000 UTCEpisode II is here! It's a much more involved chapter than the first, I can say that much XD As always, I hope ya'll enjoy, and please lemme know your thoughts by liking and commenting!
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Molerboy
I feel like Dalvir is better than all of them and after maybe squishing Sanj he will try to change their hearts about this crazy family dynamics! Also does he have a shot with Marissa now? ;)
Guireyart
Yeah no I feel ya there XD I'm glad you're feeling it though! It's fun making these chapters like this, like I usually don't have so many characters interacting at once, so it's more ambitious than the usual!
Cool
The part of me with a massive Sanj bias is a little sad, but I'm loving this story so far. Familial drama and inner conflict wrapped in a nice sizey package. Keep up the great work as always man.
nicolas
Hmm the conflict inside Dalvir is really interesting
Guireyart
Yup, it's all led to this moment, when everything turns on it's head!
Guireyart
Thanks!! Yeah I feel ya there XD I knew it had to happen, so to ease the pain I tried to make the second to last page really great lol
LBM
Spectacular plot twist. It hurts me. But Iβm for it π₯²
SmolCrowBro
If I was Dalvir, this would be so cathartic
