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Demon Jock Uncomplete story
🕑 Added 2019-03-01 18:00:03 +0000 UTCIn this story I wrote in 2015 A jock gets possessed by a demon after being tricked into accepting him because he thinks he is an angel. The story was supposed to be about the demon taking him over and turning him into a cocky gay horndog and him falling in love with Ethan the gay emo kid at school. I wrote 9 pages before I realized it was just messed up and going nowhere. Multiple trigger warnings
Here is the uncompleted story
Jock Possession
Jack yawned as he sat in class. He still had two hours till practice, and math was his worst class. The class dragged on for the next hour as he sat there half asleep.finally the bell rang,his saving grace, and he sprinted out of class. He sat down in his next class, French, the teacher was out, and since no substitutes in the district knew french they had a free day. His teammate spencer sat down next to him.
“Hey Jdog guess what?” Spencer asked.
“Umm what?” Jack asked not really liking his new nickname.
“That girl you're into,Blair, asked me to invite you to her party tonight!” Spencer said punching Jack’s arm. “You got in you dog!”
“Into what?” Jack asked rubbing his arm.
“Into her pants dude!” Spencer said shaking his head. “You’re gonna get laid tonight.”
“I wouldn’t go….I’ve heard her parties are filled with drugs, and weird stuff.” A voice behind them said. The pair turned around to see Ethan Franks. He was a short skinny kid with the classic emo look.
“What do you know faggot?” Spencer said. “All your type is useful for is…..”
“Hey Spencer stop it!” Jack interjected.
“Its fine.” Ethan said softly getting up and leaving the room.
Jack followed after into the hallway grabbing Ethan by the shoulder.
“Hey dude i’m sorry Spencer is kind of a dick sometimes.” He said
“I-I-I” Ethan choked out through tears before hugging Jack. “Thank you.” He finished running off.
The bell ring, and Jack headed towards practice. The practice went like any other, and ended quickly. He sat in the locker room after practice watching all the other guy’s bodies as they changed. Every member of the team had well built bodies that were perfect for football except for Jack. He only had lean muscle on his body, and no matter how much he worked out nothing changed. Spencer walked up behind him noticing him watching the other guys.
“Did that Ethan kid make you a fag?” He asked laughing to himself.
“Seriously spencer you need to step off him. it has only been a month, and he already had it rough before that.” Jack said.
“Look we all loved Nicole and her death sucked, but it doesn’t excuse her faggot brother.” Spencer said. Jack sighed getting up, and walking outside leaving Spencer behind. As he made his way home he went by the graveyard. Ethan sat in front of his sister’s grave talking to her. Jack had taken this way home the past two weeks, and every day he saw him sitting there just talking. His sister had died a month ago in a car accident. The police were still investigating the details of what had happened, but they did know she was buzzed at the time of her death. He watched for a moment before hurrying home to get ready for the party.
Jack walked up to blair's home, it was larger than most of the homes in his neighborhood. He walked inside to see the party had already started, and it was already wild.
“Hey you came!” Blair said walking up to Jack. His heart skipped a beat as he saw her, she was skinny with blonde hair, and emerald green eyes, she had a runners body with large breasts. Jack had a crush on her since they were in middle school.
“Yea! I can see the party already started.” Jack laughed nervously.
“Oh yea...people started to show up about a hour ago. Oh! Come on lets get you something to drink!” Blair said leading Jack through the crowd. “I’m guessing a guy like you drinks dark beer?”
“Oh….I...well...I don’t really drink” Jack said.
“Oh….” Blair said pausing.
“I mean I guess I can tonight...It is a party.” He said gulping down the instant regret he felt.
“Thats the spirit!” Blair said handing him a beer. “Oh crap someone just went upstairs. I’ll be back in a few I promise!” She dashed up the stairs chasing after the people. Jack sat on the couch drinking the beer it was earthy, but he really enjoyed it for some reason.
‘Jdog you made it!” Spencer said wobbling into the room. Jack could already tell he was drunk. “Come on we are going to talk to the ghosts!” He said dragging Jack from the couch. Jack followed after as Spencer lead him to the basement. A group of kids was sitting around a ouija board.
“Spencer you’re back!” One of the kids said, and the others cheered. “Now that we can get started again remember you can’t leave the circle until the channel is closed.” He said lighting candles around the board. “Great spirits we call upon you! Answer our questions!”
Jack, Spencer, and the kid put their hands on the moving piece while the others watched from outside the circle. They went back, and forth asking questions, until Spencer decided to speak out.
“Hey I got a question!” He said in a drunken slur. “Is Jack a faggot?” Spencer moved the piece to the yes on the board.
“Ok Spencer I have had enough of this!” Jack shouted kicking the board. It tipped over the candle, and caught on fire as Jack ran upstairs. Jack got another beer chugging it down, and then another. He was feeling woozy when he heard blair shouting from above.
“Hey Jack come up here!” She shouted from the stairs above him. He followed without thinking it through. He followed her into her room sitting on the bed.
“You know I’ve always found you really sexy.” She said rubbing his thigh. “I know you have felt the same way.” The rubbing stopped, and Jack looked over to see her removing her shirt, and bra. She grabbed his hand putting them on her breasts. They were larger than Jack had thought, and the touch made him erect. Blair smiled leaning in close to him whispering into his ear.
“Its ok. Fuck me baby.” She whispered moving his hands down to her pants. He let his fingers trace around the lips of her viagina before he stopped.
“No...I can’t do this” He said getting up, and stumbling out of the room. He made his way outside of the house running into the woods as a shortcut home before passing out.
“Wake up kid” He heard as he slowly opened his eyes. He could tell from the sky it was early in the morning. “Come on kid get up” He heard the voice again, and then he saw a hand reaching out for him. He grabbed it using it to help him up. Standing in front of him was a tall lean guy with white hair, and brown eyes.
“That was some night you had.” He said brushing dirt off of Jack.
“Who...who are you?” Jack asked trying to ignore the headache he had.
“I’m your guardian angel kid. I saw what happened last night, and decided to step in.” He said. “Point is you resisted temptation last night, and the big man thinks you need to be rewarded.”
“I do?” Jack asked confused. He was a devout christian, but never heard stories of a guardian angel coming to give gifts to someone.
“Yes, I am supposed to help you, but first you must accept me….Do you accept me Jack?” He asked.
“Uh….Yea...I guess.” Jack said still confused about what was happening.
“I just need you to sign here.” He said pulling out a piece of paper. Jack signed not reading feeling confused the whole time. “Good now that the lying is over it is time to have some fun!” He said grabbing Jack’s wrist. In a flash he was gone, and all that was left was what looked like a tattoo of two circles connected by a line. Jack stretched he was still confused about what happened, but noticed his headache was gone. He felt a burning on his neck, and looked down at the gold crucifix his grandfather had given him.
“I must be getting allergic to it” he thought. He pulled the necklace off dropping it into the mud, as he began to walk home under the soft morning light.
Jack lay on the bed in his room thoughts of the night before going through his mind. He pictured Blair’s breasts again so perfect, and he felt himself become erect again. He stuck his hand down his pants starting to touch himself.
“All teenage boys are the same” He heard a voice say. He looked up to see the man from before standing in his room.
“Who are you?” He asked.
“You can call me Alabaster.” The man said walking out from the corner.
“And you are not an angel are you?” Jack asked surprised by his own question.
“No I am not, just like you aren’t the perfect little christian you claim to be. At least after last night.” Alabaster laughed. “I am here to help you though, and that's all you need to know. I should be leaving now, but have fun with the masterbation.” He finished vanishing in thin air.
Jack looked down to notice he hasn’t taken his hands out of his pants when they were talking, and was still touching himself. He pulled his hand out quickly shaking his head.
“What is going on with me?” He thought “Maybe I have a concussion and this is all just a dream.”
He went to school the next day, the day flew by and it quickly became final period. The teacher was out again, and Spencer sat down next to him.
“Thanks for leaving that party man!” Spencer said slapping Jack on the back.
“Uh….Why?” Jack asked confused.
“After you left Blair was in tears, and well I fucked her!” He said holding his hand out for a high five. Jack rolled his eyes, but gave him a high five anyway.
“I still got to second base on her before I left.” He said then covered his mouth. He had never bragged about something like that before, and it wasn’t something he would normally do. “I gotta go….I have things to do.” He said running out of the classroom. Jack walked down the hallway into the old parts of the school that were rarely used. He ducked into an old bathroom that wasn’t functional anymore, and stood in front of the mirror. He wiped the dirt off to look at himself, his skin looked paler than it normally did, and his eyes had a purple tint to them.
“What is up with you?” He asked himself. “Why are you doing things like this?”
“Are you ok?” He heard a voice coming from the doorway. He turned to see Ethan standing in the doorway. “Are you ok Jack?” He repeated standing there.
“I don’t know….” Jack said looking into the mirror. “I think I might be sick or….” Jack collapsed onto the cold dirty bathroom floor.
“Jack! Jack!” He heard as he opened his eyes. Ethan was leaning over him shaking his body.”Hey man wake up!”
“Damn it… not again.” Jack said getting up, and brushing himself off. He looked at his watch reading the time. “Shit I’m late for practice!” He started to run out the door, but paused. “Hey thanks man, if you ever want to hangout just call me.” He said running off to practice.
Jack felt great at practice like his body was filled with fuel. He was performing better than he had ever before. Practice went by in a flash, and the team started to head into the locker rooms.
“You coming?” Spencer asked as he made his way towards them.
“Nah, I think i’m going to get some extra lifting in today.” Jack said heading towards the weight room. He sat in the weight room lifting for the next hour, he finished walking over to the mirror. His muscles looked larger than normal, but he knew it was probably just after exercise swelling. He pulled off his shirt looking at his abs, they looked more defined than before, and his V Line stood out more.
“Damn. I’m looking good.” He thought as his phone started to ring in the net room over. He ran over picking it up. “Hello?”
“Hey its….um Ethan. You said I could call you.” Ethan spoke shyly over the line.
“Oh hey dude whats up?” Jack asked walking outside.
“My parents are out, and I don’t have a ride home until tonight….I was wondering if I could come over to your house till they picked me up?” He asked
“Yea sure dude. I owe you that at least, meet me at the front of the school in fifteenth.” Jack said heading into the locker room.
The rest of the team was gone so Jack didn’t need to worry about the other guys seeing him naked. He stripped down walking into the showers turning them on. The hot water poured onto his body wiping away the dirt, and sweat from practice. He let the water wash over him for a long time, the warm water made him feel refreshed. He lost track of time as he let it rain down on him.
“Whoa…” He heard a familiar voice say from outside the showers. Jack turned around to see Ethan standing there staring at him. “I uh, I’m sorry.” He blurted out covering his eyes with his hand. “You never showed up, and some guys said they saw you heading in here.”
“Its fine, and you don’t need to cover your eyes.” Jack said turning off the water. He couldn’t explain it, but he wanted Ethan to see him naked. He walked over to Ethan pulling his hand away from his face.
“O-Ok.” Ethan said trying not to stare at Jack's body, but failing. Jack walked past him into the locker room drying himself off with a towel.
“Sorry I took so long….I got distracted.” Jack said slipping on his underwear.
“Its fine. Its my fault I shouldn’t have gone looking in the shower.” Ethan said looking down embarrassed.
“Its fine man.” Jack said laughing pulling on his shirt. “Now if you are ready its time to leave.” Jack walked out of the locker room with Ethan following behind. They walked to Jack’s home, and Jack was careful to avoid any route that went by the cemetery. They arrived at his home, and walked up to the front porch. He tried to open the door, but it was locked.
“I guess the family out, just give me a second.” He said hopping off the porch, and looking around in some bushes. He came back up a second later with a key unlocking the door.
“you hungry?” Jack asked after getting into the house.
“I could eat.” Ethan said.
“good because I am starving.” Jack said already in the kitchen. Ethan walked into the kitchen seeing Jack reading a piece of paper.
“What’s that?” He asked. Jack crumpled up the paper, and threw it into the trash.
“Just a letter from my parents.” He said putting some pizza puffs into the microwave. “They won a vacation from some company called Daemon Corp. I guess they will be out of town for the next two weeks in hawaii.”
“Oh I’m sorry.” Ethan said taking a seat at the kitchen island.
“Don’t be sorry, its awesome! Get the whole house to myself for a week!” Jack said putting the pizza puffs on the island in front of Ethan. Jack sat down next to Ethan, and the two sat in silence eating for several minutes.
“Why are you so nice to me?” Ethan shouted, breaking the silence. “At first I thought it was because my sister died, but then I remembered all of the times before that you stood up for me, especially against that asshat Spencer.”
“I don’t know really. I’ve always liked you, and don’t let Spencer get you down he is just a dick.” Jack said in between bites.
“I know, I dealt with him all the time.” Ethan said.
“You did?” Jack asked confused.
“Yea him, and Nicole hung out all the time. In fact they were going to hangout the day…” Ethan trailed off staring into the distance, holding back tears.
“Hey man its ok.” Jack said putting his hand on Ethan’s shoulder. “How about we go watch a movie or something to get your mind off things?” Ethan nodded as tears began to stream down his face. Jack lead him to the basement where the big screen was putting on a comedy. As they were watching Ethan’s phone rang, and he walked out of the room to answer it. After several minutes he came back into the room.
“Hey I don’t want to be a burden, but my parents just called, and they are coming back tonight...:” Ethan started to say.
“You can stay here tonight if you want.” Jack said interrupting him mid sentence.
“Thank You.” Ethan said sitting back down on the couch next to Jack. The air kicked on as they watched, and Jack noticed Ethan shivering. He got up walking to the thermostat turning the heat up, but the air just kicked on harder.
“Thats odd” He said looking around. “Well I guess I will give you the blanket then” He said grabbing it, and handing it to Ethan as he sat back down. Ethan covered himself in the blanket wrapping it around him.
“Thank you.” He said as they watched the movie.
Jack shivered looking over to Ethan. He had fallen asleep just a few minutes after Jack gave him the blanket, and that was the only extra blanket they had.
“I hope he doesn’t mind.’ Jack thought scooting closer, to Ethan, and using some of the extra blanket for his own body.The warmth from the blanket quickly made him drowsy, and he found himself falling asleep.
“Come on kid open your eyes.” Jack heard, his eyes snapping opening. He was standing in a grassy plain, but the sky was a pure black. Standing directly across from him was Alabaster, but he now looked exactly Jack only his were a pure red, and his muscles were bigger.
“What is this place?” Jack asked confused, and wondering if he was in a nightmare.
“It's your brain dumbass, or at least a visual representation of it.” Alabaster looked around for a second before turning back to Jack. “And a lazily made one at that, but I have already waited long enough for you to get here kid.”
“Why? What happens here?” Jack asked.
“Kid if you want me to get anywhere without this chat taking forever you are going to need to shut up” Alabaster said straight forward. “Now like I said before i’m no angel, but i’m no demon ethier. I was called out when you used that board at that party, and I followed you that night. I am here to fix things that have been going on in this town.” He paused for a second looking up as if someone was speaking to him. “Look I don’t have much time kid before you wake up, everything you think you know is a lie, and don’t be afraid of what's about to come.”
Jack woke up with a sudden shudder. He was convinced everything that had just happened to him was a dream, but it all seemed weirdly real. Jack opened his eyes seeing the back of Ethan’s head in front of him, somehow they had both shifted to lay across the couch with Jack spooning Ethan. Jack pulled Ethan closer wrapping his arm around him, it felt good to have someone close to him after the dream he just had.
Jack woke up as he felt Ethan starting to shift. Sunlight was pouring in from the windows. They were both late for school. Jack shook Ethan waking up him up.
“Hey I think we are late for school.” Jack said as Ethan came to.
“Oh late….” Ethan murmured half asleep. “Why is your arm around me?”
“Oh...I’m sorry.” Jack said removing his arm.
“Its fine….I liked it.” Ethan said. “Plus we aren’t late today is a waiver day.” Jack had forgotten it was a waiver day, meaning the school was closed for teacher training.
“Well I guess I can make you breakfast then while we wait on your parents.” Jack said stretching.
The pair sat at the table eating scrambled eggs as the sound of a car in the driveway was heard.
“That must be my parents.” Ethan running from the table, and putting on his shoes. “I had a great time, if you ever want to hangout just text me.” He finished running out the door. Jack got up watching as Ethan got into a junked up car, and it drove down the road leaving a trail of exhaust behind it. Jack cleaned up the plates for breakfast, he noticed that Ethan had left his school bag behind.
“Hey its Jack, I’m glad you had a great time :) , but you left your bookbag behind.” He texted Ethan.
“Oh i’m sorry! I’ll be in the area tomorrow around three if you want me to pick it up.” Ethan texted him.
“Yea i’ll be here just drop by whenever.” As he texted back he got a text from Spencer.
“Hey can we meet? it’s important.” A location was attached, but nothing else. Jack sighed wondering what this could be about. He set off to the location he was sent, it lead him to a small cabin hidden in the woods.
“Hey in here!” Spencer shouted from the cabin. You walk up to the cabin following Spencer inside. The place had no electricity and obviously needed repairs.
“Why am I here?” Jack asked as Spencer sat on an old dusty couch.
“I’m worried that Ethan kid is turning you into a faggot. Heard he stayed the night at your house.” Spencer said. Jack sighed putting his hands on his head.
“Ok Spencer first of all that's not how it works. Second there is nothing wrong with people being gay, i’m sorry your redneck ass family can’t move past the 1800’s and realize you don’t need to be a straight white man to have any rights!” Jack shouted kicking over a stool next to him. “Oh and I know you were with Nicole the night she died!” Spencer’s mouth instantly shut, he seemed to stun to say anything.
“You know?” He managed to say after a minute.
“Yes I know, Ethan told me! What were you doing with her?!” Jack shouted, but it was no use Spencer dashed past him running deeper into the woods.
“For fucks sake.” Jack mumbled as he walked out of the cabin heading home.
The next day arrived quickly, and Jack decided to head to the workout room before meeting Ethan to give back his backpack. Jack sat in the weight room do some bench presses, he had pulled the bench near the mirrors so he could himself as he lifted. His muscles looked dramatically larger than before, and his pecs were starting to pop out from his body. He finished moving the weight bench back and putting on his shirt, it seemed a tighter fit than it had when he first got there. Jack walked outside of the weight room hearing a loud scream, and then a thud. He rushed over to the noise.
Ethan laid on the ground unconscious, his head was bleeding. Jack looked to see a figure running away from the scene.
“Spencer.” He muttered under his breath, but he didn’t have time to chase after him. Jack pulled out his phone calling emergency services. Within minutes the squad was there loading Ethan up. Jack tried to ride in the ambulance to the hospital, but was stopped.
“Sorry kid family only, but you can come visit him when he's cleared.” The paramedic said shutting the doors to the ambulance, and driving off. Jack watched as they pulled out of the school he knew Spencer did this, but he needed to find out why.
Jack had checked Spencer’s home finding no one home he decided to check the cabin he had met Spencer in before. He walked in seeing Spencer kneeled down rubbing blood off his hands in a bucket of water.
“Why the fuck did you do that!” Jack yelled kicking Spencer over.
“Look man you don’t understand I don’t want to go to jail!” Spencer cried. Jack pulled spencer up pressing him against a wall.
“You are going to tell me everything, right now.” Jack growled in a voice that wasn’t his own.
“All right, All right!” Spencer said tears streaming down his face. “Look I was with Nicole the night she died. I got her drunk and tried some stuff. She wouldn’t let me, but I kept trying.” He paused for a second closing his eyes. “She ran out after I tried to put some pills into her drink, and thats when the accident happened. I swear I didn’t mean for it to happen!”
“You’re a murderer!” Jack barked filling with rage. “You killed her!” The room around him suddenly felt hot as he continued to scream at Spencer. “You killed Nicole!” Jack stopped looking around noticing the cabin was in flames, he let go of Spencer walking out of the cabin. As he walked away he watched as the cabin imploded on itself with no sign of Spencer leaving.
Jack sat next to Ethan’s hospital bed as he slept. He had woken up for a few minutes in the ambulance ride to the hospital, but had been unconscious ever since. Jack turned on the tv.
“I’m Susan Smith, your local news reporter, today I come to you with terrible news.” Blasted out of the TV. “A fire in an abandoned cabin has taken the life of local teenager, Spencer Caldwell.”
“Spencer’s dead?” Jack heard Ethan say weakly.
“Holy shit you’re awake!” Jack yelled pressing the button to call the nurse.
“Spencer’s dead?” Ethan repeated trying to sit up. Nurses rushed in kicking Jack out of the room, he walked down the hallway to the outside.
