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Wet American Summer (Audio) Chapter 10

🕑 Added 2018-04-26 21:00:02 +0000 UTC

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Hey, glad you care enough about the story and characters to feel that way about it! I get what you're saying, but honestly I was writing this as I went along, chapter by chapter, not necessarily worrying about the bigger picture until it was time to finish it off at chapter 36. So if you've only read until chapter 10 so far, you still have a long way to go! Hopefully it will end up being satisfying. The whole idea behind this story was to take the usual ABDL story tropes and kind of go into the psychological aspect behind it and give some kind of reasoning to the humiliating situations we put those characters in. But beyond that I wasn't trying to write anything more than an entertaining story. I started that story a few years ago when I was something like 21 or 22 and at the time I had no idea I would keep writing it for 2 years straight. Anyways, hope you enjoy the other chapters and the sequel I'm currently writing! Cheers

I hate to say this, but so far this series has gone in a wrong direction. Blackmailing family? First off, all Ashley needs to do now is show her phone to Aunt sally, or yet alone Frankie’s mom, and boom problem solved. Ash has physical proof of Frankie black mailing her and that should be enough to get Frankie punished, or at the very least they come to eaqual terms and this whole rivalry can be put to rest. But really, why focus on such a power ful rivalry? You have so much to work with. You have husbands and wives mid 20s/ 30s, teenagers and tweenagers, and yet you only focus on one girl going through this? Such wasted potential. This one pesky rivalry has gone so far that at a certain point I just start feeling anger and disappointment for this family, not horniness. I assume this is still supposed to be sexually pleasing right? Bc it honestly feels like at this point that this story would’ve been better off as an actual ABDL book. Those do exist, erotic literature. This story would be a huge success for the ABDL literature community. I am at the point now where I care too much about Ashley. I don’t want embarrassingly kinky stuff to happen to her anymore because I just feel bad. She is straight up being bullied in this family and this could legit be seen as like a traumatic summer for her in the future. This started off so friendly and kinky but now? It’s just two girls at each other’s throats. I’m hoping more characters step into a bigger role and also have kinky things happen as a distraction. I still appreciate all the content and I am happy to continue supporting the Patreon. Just wanted my honest feed back out there. I know this must be such hard work to put together all of this, and for the most part i am impressed. And grateful


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