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Wet American Summer (Chapter 35)

🕑 Added 2018-11-26 21:00:02 +0000 UTC

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Isn't the last chapter coming up today?

I’d love one more scene where Jacob puts Ashley in pull-ups...

Candy

I am excited to see where it ends and I am personally rooting for Ashley as I tend to when I get to know characters. I just hope it’s not one of those wel thought out plans foiled for no real reason, but if the next is the final chapter I’m inclined to trust it won’t just end abruptly like many well started stories I’ve read. Or like “chasing Emily” which I didn’t like how that ended. Keep up the good work!

Assuming the bomb is literal (After re-reading the chapters leading up to this, I almost entirely don't), you're saying you would be okay with Ashley blowing the house and everyone in it up? You would like that as the ending. Really. I find that hard to believe. @Allerted I probably should have had more faith in you, Allerted and that hot take was off just one read with the rest of the context a little bit fragmented in my memory. I do believe the story will come to a satisfactory end but @Adam, if you are seriously going to take my first comment to heart about a literal murder that does not fit her character or the tone of this narrative and your response to that is to say, "No stay the course and blow em up", the issue, I think lies with you.

Need the next part as soon as possible, don't listen to storytime, just keep writing the story your way.

This is... not the end I was hoping for... I hope by "bomb" you mean laxative and not that Ashley is literally going to murder people... It's uhh... QUITE the cliffhanger...

A bomb?! She's planning on blowing up the house?

Wow! That's promising!


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