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Pacifist Finale Episode - Part 1
🕑 Added 2022-09-10 07:00:05 +0000 UTCHey guys. I have been having issues motivating myself to complete the episode, I am therefore going to just complete 5 minutes a day and put it up here for feedback. Doing things in small chunks is a good way to get stuff done. Hope you enjoy it, as always, any feedback appreciated. Anything wrong or out of place. These first 5 minutes will certainly be the best part of the episode anyway.
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Great stuff!
Gocubbies
4:50 The “Do it” fits, but I feel if franklin first counters with a “what?” or “the fuck” after lesters normal line about killing michael then trevor, then the scene would flow better/deliver a better punch.
