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Phoenix Under the Umbrella (Umbrella Academy AU) Chapter 23: I wish...

🕑 Added 2024-08-30 22:45:13 +0000 UTC

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CHEONMA

What if her abilities work by using a type of energy, but the stronger the wish is, the more energy she needs, for example, life energy, or a type of energy that requires time, for example, she has the energy of one year. Strong wishes cannot be used like the way she summoned Nathan.

Silva Kayky

It would be cool if her powers were symbolic, if it depended on the way the wish were made, like a wish on her birthday would be stronger than throwing a coin into a well.

Asura

Also keep it with “I wish” nobody should EVER care about the family being OP when literally her entire mother’s side of the family has powers that are OP asf.

Asura

Thanks for the chapter 👋

Selvor Grim

I vote symbolic as well. Like you had Klaus say. Birthday wish, wishing on a shooting star, wishing well. Etc etc

Asura

What a beginning wtf, I just sat down.

Bryan Vargas

No you're right, don't worry I'm not upset by it. I also noticed when I was writing the chapter, even through out all the fics I've written i alway have trouble cementing the personalities of my Main characters, other characters are fine since they already have their own personalities but my own Mc's are the one I always have trouble in. I always go for which line would be the most funny for my MC to say, which somehow ends them all having the same personalities. Its a really bad habit I'm trying to fix but it's hard

Green223

I don't know if you have realized this yet and this isn't me saying your stories are bad in fact they are quite good. But you have a way of making all Your MCs into the same person but different powers always talking about how handsome they are and being pretty arrogant to almost everyone. Sorry if it upset you to read that but I just want to point it out in case you were blind to it by being to close so blinding yourself to something that an outside observer can see easily. P.S. Claire should need the symbolic gesture of blowing out a candle or a shooting star for her wish powers to work.

Nick Pearson

I think she should need a symbolic action; the more potent the symbol, the greater the result. Also, the meaning of each symbol could be different. For example, blowing out birthday candles is a good symbol and she can use it on anyone, but crossing a black cat is a bad symbol and she can still use it on anyone.

Bryan Vargas

Possibly

Rogue_Eagle99

So she could put a regulation on it like “I head a rumor you couldn’t use your ability unless you really need it” or something

Bryan Vargas

And Allison can warp reality by saying "I heard a rumor..."

Bryan Vargas

In the show Allison was also the reason as to why Vanya never discovered she had abilities since Reginald had her say "I heard a rumor... that you thought you were ordinary"

Rogue_Eagle99

But MC can literally rip open worm holes to travel across the universe

Rogue_Eagle99

Yes but in the show Allison did her power to get her to sleep so technically she could use hers to stop her daughter from using her ability till older

Bryan Vargas

But the horrible things a toddler can do can add to the story

Bryan Vargas

Nope, just saying "I wish" is enough

Àñthòñý Ćrućíál

That's what I need an explanation for if its just about saying "I Wish" or more is needed.

SantiZap real sister

Maybe she need to say I wish and always need to blow on a candle Every time she want to use her powers

Bryan Vargas

Whatever she wishes comes true, I'm just trying to figure out how they would work, Either like Allison who can manipulate reality by just saying "I heard a rumor...", but for Claire it would be "I wish..." or by wishing on a symbolic object that represents getting wishing upon something, like a candle or throwing a coin in a wishing well

Rogue_Eagle99

Similar to the “I head a rumor” but wish based not mental control style

Rogue_Eagle99

I’d say just saying “I wish” works because none of the others have to have anything special to activate theirs. But giving a toddler that ability can be horrible. So if you do go just the phrase I’d say maybe a limit on either the ability or how often it can be used

Àñthòñý Ćrućíál

Please explain her powers.

FadedWaffle

Symbolic, if just saying "I Wish" can drag someone across the universe it might be a little op


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