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🕑 Added 2025-01-12 01:03:10 +0000 UTCI changed somethings about the latest chapter, i changed around 2 powers of MJ's, I had forgotten I had giving her the ability to communicate with animals and the Subatomic Manipulation was seriously too OP for her to simply have so I changed that as well... I might give her that power in the future if I decide to do another upgrade but for now she's just able to create constructs.
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Green223
I'm sorry. I don't mean to be super nitpicky on this whole MJ powers thing it's just that your characters are leaning further and further from their spider origins. Literally in Felicias case as she is a cat now. I don't mind them having other powers I just think they should fit the spider theme or else why is Spider in their name.
Ilove_3260
Oh that already happened
Bryan Vargas
Brother you're killing me here...
Green223
I still think MJ's Psychic Construct power should be more narrow and only allow her to create Spider Constructs of any type and size up to the size of the Spiders in Spider Riders
Bryan Vargas
The cosmic storm brother, you don't read on patreon so you don't know what I'm referring to yet.
Ilove_3260
I thought she could only talk to spiders
Bryan Vargas
Nah never 👀
T.0.PA.CI.0
You scared for a moment. I thought you were gonna announce to pause this fic or something related.
Àñthòñý Ćrućíál
I'm telling you I really want more PJ chapters than anything else but thanks for the Spider-Man update.
Bryan Vargas
Its more than just animals, I didn't explain it fully, it's better explain in the chapter I updated
KingSpy25i .
But the power to talk to animals is not that OP, right? It's just like squirrel girl.
Bryan Vargas
She had the powers of the pink girl but I changed it to Green Lantern
KingSpy25i .
Like that pink girl from Invincible? Or like a green lantern? Also, the power to talk to animals is not that OP, the other one?Yes it's very OP.
