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Spider-Man Mayham (AU) Chapter 332: Kraven’s War (14)

🕑 Added 2025-07-15 18:13:07 +0000 UTC

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Vrati

I don't really like how Peter is in this chapter at the end. Especially after the talk with the Watcher, TOAA, and how he is the whole fic. I genuinely moved when Peter had a talk with Uatu and asking if he did good enough, so this is very out of character. Sure, he can get angry, lost his cool for a while, but He shouldn't be this blood thirsty and a bully. This Peter hasn't been through enough traumas to be this dark (like in the comic when Kingpin hurt aunt May). Especially when Kraven is already beaten and beg for his life. Peter also wouldn't 'feed him to the wolves'. This contradict everything Spider-Man stand for, he failed his own standard. Spider-Man is like Superman, he inspired people to be better. Please, Shadow, consider fixing it. I know you can make this a beautiful emotional scene like when Daredevil refuse to kill Kingpin in the series, instead of this edgy, bully Peter.

Ugly

The whole manic thing was really out of character


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