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🕑 Added 2022-04-01 08:25:55 +0000 UTC

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CplProtoss

No yeah, I get why you did it, and think its more or less fine, but I just thought that maybe it could have been like some was said now and some was revealed later through interactions, but at the same time that might leave other people less satisfied with the information given, especially since you made something new and different from the original background. So what I think was good, but personally I feel like it could have been spread out a little more with some slice of life we had been missing for so long thrown in. Though I'm no writer or anything so take all my opinions with large amounts of salt. Still love the story and I love everything about the world you made that's not exactly the same as the original material.

FanHarem

yeah, but it was either this or divide this entire background through Gu Yuena's memories with a considerable gap and I just don't think I could have pulled it off not because I don't like a challenge, I just wouldn't have the patience to do that properly and it would end up slightly mediocre

CplProtoss

Honestly, as someone who loves Warlock of the Magus World, this backstory was just up my alley and I personally liked it, but admittedly it was quite a info dump to have two chapters on it in a row


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