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Paradise of Infinity: 255

🕑 Added 2023-02-09 14:43:20 +0000 UTC

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FanHarem

well, there are many instances I read in the edited works I could have done better. Of course, the edits aren't drastic but I hope they smoothen the ride a lot more than before

CkLance

The early usage of past-tense fit with Nik's passive personality. As he discovered himself and gained confidence you also transitioned into using present-tense. Shows Nik's growth imo. Like you said, "If it isn't broke, don't fix it."

Dogan

His first life really was hell in just about every way, huh. Anyway, I guess Ty Lee's sisters not having anything truly ominous going on and just having some good ol' family drama is better than where my mind went to.


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