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Stop it, Bro~ (7)

🕑 Added 2022-08-16 18:52:25 +0000 UTC

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SanMarco Geddes

Absolutely love the chapters, thanks for the awesome work!!

FanHarem

thanks, I was kinda worried that the character introduction and interaction may have been bad but yeah, the starting is somewhat rocky but then again, that is a shared attribute with all my fics, heh. As for Brody, if I have to mark his strength then he is as strong as Gear Second Luffy right before they were separated... probably. I fear marking strength in the first place due to the lack of any quantifier

Darkanlan

Eh, it was only so so. The whole letting them get away bit and calling for Nezumi after ambushing the village and escape seemed like he half assed it. He could have crippled them the first time around and none of that would have happened. Though the villagers could have called for the marines and Nezumi could have showed up and been an idiot and let him show off how he beats the crap out of the marines. Letting yourself get your ass kicked by a bunch of small fries when you could have easily destroyed them always annoys me. One rock through the head at a speed they can't even see would have done the trick. I know for a fact if you shot someone with a sniper rifle they won't see the bullet coming. I figure his strength should let him at least toss a rock half that speed and the fishman still wouldn't see it coming.

FanHarem

but I still want more feedback~ What about other stuff? Was this Arlong arc at least worth reading?

FanHarem

bruh, from ground floor to top floor would take time no matter how little and all Arlong had to do was clench. I did think of that. But then I realized that Brody's speed would seem more plausible in a small, intimate space

Darkanlan

That was still super lame. As powerful as he is he could have thrown a rock through Arlongs head killing him instantly and prevented all that crap. Seriously, they're weak as hell. I doubt he could move fast enough to even dodge if a rock was thrown at his head by a member of the Hanma family. Fishman are only powerful in water, out of it they're just slightly above normal humans and that's only because they live so deep in the sea that they had to adapt to the pressure down there.


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