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B2 Ch 16: The Mind Singer

🕑 Added 2022-11-01 04:44:06 +0000 UTC

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S Money

> New Skill Level: Card Shuffling Think you forgot to add the details.

Undead Writer

Thanks for the chapterbb

Matheus Pozzobon

This story hardly ever makes anany logical sense

Victor

I know that the scholars had it coming and all, but damn, Arthur and Cressida just committed involuntary manslaughter by the handful there when releasing them scourgelings. 😬

da Finnci

If they immediately ran out and warned others from the danger, lives would have been saved. Instead they chose to stay and reopen the room so they could get cards for themselves.

neco

I forgot to ask at the begging but weren't they being trailed by that one dude that is looking after the pink dragon?

evan keane

They didn't let the scourglings out, the scourgelings actively destroyed the containment wards on the door.

Travis

I don’t particularly like reading about characters that evade their responsibility. It was ok to steal cards from people who let a Rare and others rot and who turned out to have scourgelings locked up. But letting the scourgelings out when innocents were at risk is a different story. If they had escaped the first time they opened the door then that would have been fine, since Arthur didn’t know and scourgelings shouldn’t have been there.

Julien Fellegara

Why the scourge didn't try to eat his legendary cards? :)

Rubeno

Think what's realistic and not in terms what can or cannot be dismissed as "edgy". Bleeding hearts are as annoying as edgelords. What's the point of being afraid to show how bad things in the world really are?

Honour Rae

Thanks!

Honour Rae

Thank you!

Honour Rae

Yeah they were doing bad bad things…

Honour Rae

I totally get what you’re saying and I agree. The first version I came up with just felt a little… edge lordy, haha. I had to tone it down for this draft.

Rubeno

I always thought that darker stories feel closer to how reality is like. You can expect the worse from humanity. This makes any acts of kindness the more from the lack of better word "tasty"?

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! :-)

Markus Iversen

Tyftc

Yashakami

I enjoyed the mention of a common sense card lol. Mind magic is always a dirty practice, especially when unrestrained or unregulated. These scholars are worse than I thought.

Yashakami

Ooooh yeah! Been so excited! Thanks for the chapter!


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