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Another one bites the dust~

🕑 Added 2024-05-07 05:16:33 +0000 UTC
Another one bites the dust~

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NewGuy

πŸ‘

Tacolord

hope it keeps going past sunday lets get monday week 2!

Black Kitten

No need to apologize. I've had help keeping the story on track, as the first draft didnt even have tuesday in mind, let alone a series. And you don't get better unless you review And see where you can improve. So positive Criticism is always welcome

Fox

*just want to make a little apology here as I feel my choice of words do still read a little like devaluing the series, despite attempting to make an assurance against it - it's so great that you managed to create such a story from its initial conditions, and I'm really happy that enough others saw it the same way to help it grow as much. I had only meant to say that now you're coming up to the opportunity to start 'fresh', you have the leeway to employ the hindsight of the initial formatting mismatch, which gives you much more freedom as a writer. And the audience get a much more adaptive and dynamic story for its length as a result ❀

Black Kitten

Yeah It did start abruptly, and originally never was meant to drag out this far. But regardless, it somehow stuck well with people well and grew. If had to start over, the pacing would be more organic. But honestly, I think I grew and learned a lot while working on it, so is hard to say. So hopefully I add those learned skills to future stories after this one. ^^ whether with new characters, or continuing with these ones.

Fox

Just really feel the desire to echo things here that I've mentioned in the past - As this story has seemed to have gotten placed in one of the more special positions in the fandom in terms of narrative, personally I really feel future series would be done the best service if they had a more intentional/organic time structure. So where this series kind of spawned essentially accidentally, where the narrative flow was literally just meant to depict the flow of a morning and then kind of had the next morning tacked-on in an ad-hoc way (of course not to diminish the steadily and continuously improving writing over time), when starting something new it can instead have the hindsight of being produced over a longer term, and so be given a far, far more accommodating and flexible time structure. Which in turn then makes it much easier to create a considerably richer narrative than can reasonably be fit into the current (again, technically accidental) consecutive-day structure, which I feel would only really be of benefit to both you (and Cerwyn, if he's still actively contributing) and everyone else.

Muddypaws

Love’n the work!

florre wes

Cant wait for sundays. You have done more than earned a break and i hope the comic will go on

Churchill (formerly TeaBear)

You might wanna rephrase that... You may find yourself 70+ years old and still making "Mornings" stories. ;)

Black Kitten

It could be~ if people want it

Pony Stark

Next chapter; they go to church. That's it. That's the whole plot. Hey now, there's a whole empty shelf below that one; we better be getting another week with the twins!

Magra215

The story was great, it's gonna be fun to see how the next chapter rolls along, also hoping the next chapter is just Seb and Serah alone all day so they can spent all day bonding.

Reynard

Might be an ADDITION to the family soon :3

ArcadeDragon

How DARE you ask for some rest. I pay you an entire McDonalds happy meal + mcflurry per month, sir, and I expect you to work on yourself to death for it. Morrisa pinup. Chop-chop.

Black Kitten

Still 1 page left for 10 tier! The pause will be for 20 tier this week, then next week will be 10 tier (after last page there) Am staggering it this way so I still get a breather, and not holding up the story for those waiting for last page of Saturday. Hope it makes sense ^^

TheGoldenToad

I was kinda surprised that there wasn't "End of Saturday" on that last post in the 10 dollar tier. Take all the time you need, I'm excited for Sunday. I hope our favorite Zebra lady can bring the family together (And hopefully join it perhaps?)


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