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Hard Enough - Chapter 388 - Lorekeeper

🕑 Added 2025-12-16 19:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Joyeus

They confirmed figured out which tribe Flint was from through his brother, Jade is from the wing tribe so she is not directly related to them.

Azril Aditya

But to Brock his Gym and family is more important than the tribe, even if that tribe is his blood and heritage. Besides Brock is already busy with his Gym responsibility, and his planned vacation/journey. If Forrest want to take up being a Gym leader i imagine brock maybe tempted to lead the Tribe, but sadly he has no interest in leading the Gym and so Brock has to wait for Yolanda.

Spacefather

Long feedback that I really hope the author will consider: I think it doesn't make any sense that Brock is floating the idea of leaving so soon after just becoming the overlord. Imagine a new CEO (that's being questioned) coming in, and within one week he floats his plan to retire within 1 year. How would that be taken by everyone else in the company? The morale would drop, people would question his policies and would worry for the future of the company. The crusher Tribe just rolling over because he bested them and because he's just miles ahead in combat is rather unbelievable, think imperialism and indigenous civilizations just rolling over rather than fighting to the death. I give Brock some allowance given that he's blood related, but floating the idea of stepping down SO SOON is just a big no. Minimally I think Brock must have needed to reassure the witnesses and to promise that he will be there and check in regularly to make sure that he shows that he has skin-in-the-game, in order for them to properly trust him, otherwise it feels like the crusher arc is just a short filler arc Also to make the case for him to stay overlord in the foreseeable future: I understand that Brock has a lot on his plate, but if we follow the trajectory of the story, a lot has changed for the better! Flint and Lola are back in the picture, with therapy, and taking active part in taking care of the children, so unless you're plotting them running away again soon there's less parenting for Brock to do, besides, He's moving on into his own adulthood with his upcoming marriage, so it'll be a good time for Flint to have a talk with Brock to reassure him and for their father-son relationship to mend and then to have the family be a side thing The gym is running fine with the staff all being on board, Brock has build a great "company" with framework and processes in place, and Forrest is growing well on his journey, there can be succession planning in which Forrest can step up (just like Misty will, and the two can be the next top gym duo) for some battles, also Flint Sabrina herself is multitasking with her gym+investment+acting+doll collecting I think Brock has advanced to the stage where a gym leader is "too small" for him, and I think being the overlord + guardian fits better than gym leader + guardian into the world building you have done and the threats, legendary pokemons being setup, honestly I find the challenges gym battles pose to him to be more and more boring to read, any losses by him is just him conceding (the last battles that the followers protested were during the Aces, which he could have won). Not sure what others think, please comment also if you think gym battles are getting stale and you wanna see more of other battles Imho Being the crusher Tribe overlord will better fit into adventuring, meeting legends, alpha pokemon, etc, the rest of the plot setups that you have done, and serve to make Hard Enough an interesting read that I look forward to find out what happens next, whereas keeping the status quo (family guy/gym leader) would serve to make it a "comfort food" for me to read in which things are mostly the same. I respect either but hope that you can consider my perspective!

Michael Ox

Still on the big hate Lance train, if he is known to favour his clan I imagine there should be problems

angie bell

I hope the crusher tribe members show up around the gym. I think some would be delighted to try some of Brock's challenges or see his place!

nugitoBambino

man i spent the first half of that chapter thinking the "overlord" that stepped down was gonna be brock traveling back in time — but the "due to old age" seems to rule that out (would've been funny though)

Chris

I actually like that Brock isn't going to be the Overlord. He's going to help them get set up in their Integration, he's going to remain connected to the clan, but he won't lead. In a real way, it puts him in The EXACT same position as Lance. Remember, Lance may be the Champion who leads the league, but he doesn't lead the Blackthorn Clan. The Blackthorn elders do. Lance has power and influence within the clan, and is a future head elder leader (probably when he retires) but he's not in charge yet. That said, he is using his power to push back on Elders behaving badly and making amends for their BS (see Kaede). This sets Brock up to be someone similar for the Crusher tribe, the strongest younger member who steps in to correct Elders, but not the internal lead. It reinforces a major theme of this story that it's not about One Guy, it's about uplifting groups.

dragonslaver

I was thinking about misty mountain

dragonslaver

I thought he wanted to ask glimmer about empress?

john

You about the full moon is happening in a week, Brock’s ursaring evolve Ursaluna

Big ToFu

not gonna lie, the start of this chapter really frustrated me, because this is like the 4th or 5th time you had him step up and then go sike. You thought Brock was going to perform at his full potential, nahh, this aint that story, he's gonna go back and chill at his gym. I see 3 paths forward, but from how the story is, to going to be that.... sigh. Thanks for the chapter

Robert Lemanski

> Suzie, having been observing Glimmer nodded seriously. “I like this woman! She can be our auntie!” > Glimmer shot Suzie a smirk. “Awww, I like you too. I’ll call you Glimmer-on-the-cliff!” Correction, it should be "You can call me Glimmer-on-the-cliff". Unless Glimmer is saying Suzie can share her name lol.

Robert Lemanski

The Pokemon Who Must Not Be Named: "So, it was you who made all those desperate soldiers say my name." Agatha: "I do not regret doing so." The Pokemon Who Must Not Be Named: "Good- they were delicious."

CentaureHeart

So we still don't know for sure if Jade is Brock's grandma

Neruz

Agatha going to have a grump-off with Giratina.

ShinLupin

Brock is meeting many legendaries, why mot one more?

ShinLupin

Or maybe friendly with Agatha, she could qualify as a Miko and Dragons like them.

Mr Mouse

Sabrina, eating Szechuan for the first time: "I can feel the burn overtaking me... It is a good pain."

Qweku_v

excellent chapter.

SailorOfHouseThunderBird

That or of Princess Brock of Arendelle.

Alexander Gofric

I really hope there is an encounter with Giratina. I know he's scary and everything but in that movie he was helpful and kind with Ash and stopped fighting Dialga. I kinda want the encounter to be friendly if there is one, for Brock to flip the switch and recognize Giratina is not completely the eldritch horror he's portrayed as. Also really hope tons of mega stones are found, if the strongest of pokemon go there to fight and then rest and Giratina being one of the strongest legendaries out there it would make sense it exudes enough of whatever energy it is to form a ton of mega stones for however long its been. Agatha is right that it probably is a treasure trove. Also would be super cool for her to find a gengarite. If you look it up there is a cute youtube video of giratina being friendly with Ash.

Homeless One

This seems like a long term arc setup. I'm assuming that the time travel arc is coming up first, and with everything else on Brock's plate, that's gonna take center stage for a good while.

Petrox

I think sponsoring some of the tribe to do a journey and employ some to the gym would be a good idea for them to learn the culture outside of the tribe. Also Lorelei should learn to sing frozen. To appease the little sister that wanted to meet her ice dinosaur.

Incraze

I dont think it was intentional, but the "ooooooh" to start the song led me into reading it in the spongebob opening theme.

David Green

So now we're going to see fan art of Sabrina and Kirlia in style of bad boys aren't we?

TexanWarrior

Amazing chapter is always thanks

Eli

Thanks for the chapter!

moonlit_pale_blood

Seems to me like a meeting with Giratina is on the table in the future and we might get some answers about how our Brock self inserted.

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter


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