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Hard Enough - Chapter 389 - Letting go of power

🕑 Added 2025-12-22 19:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Orbnet

There is no way it would be okay for them to keep the tyranitarite, it would be like trying to integrate a smaller country and trying to keep people happy, while making of with the crown jewellery. I understand u can't make everyone happy, but why ho out of your way and make people unhappy???

angie bell

I wonder if are Orion gonna want to join the moon dance around the moonstone? Be good special moon power for them!

KarmaA

TFTC, The plan for leadership appears workable. He was already verging on overloaded with the hats he was juggling. Minor Typos: bur first communicaiotn > but first communication shon > shone

Dirk Gent Lee

Love and hate are brain neighbors. I still think it’d be the most fun outcome even if odds have cratered

nugitoBambino

hmmm i'm more torn. just feels like "long-distance overlord" would be a disservice to the tribe itself. although functionally having him as a benchmark sort of has in that role anyway. honestly, i think it really depends on hwo this play out. i think if he's *functionally* doing that (inconsistent overlord stays in power, with frequent infighting, causing them to default back to brock), to allow for that vector of story telling, i think i'm satisfied with it. but agree if it's just a dropped plotline i'd be disappointed.

Robert Lemanski

Gotta be honest, I am incredibly disappointed Brock will be giving up the role of Overlord. Brock in this story has outgrown the role of Gym Leader and so, while he can and should continue as one, he should move on to being Guardian and Overlord combo- a Guardian Overlord. Especially since the Crusher Tribe seems to take care of so many Legendary sites. Brock permanently staying on as a "long distance Overlord" would be a fantastic step for the story, and would allow for a lot of Legendaries to appear in their natural habitat.

Simca

Very elegant way to handle the Crushers, and glad he set Lance straight. Can’t just be strong to be a leader. Need to be wise and impartial.

Viva01

Yeah, that's fair. Not sure how organically that could be worked in, but Lance is going to get some W's personally in the future with him basically being the main in a dating sim game now that he's the most eligible bachelor bar perhaps Steven Stone.

Melikereading

I love the story, but I have a critique. Whenever it comes to Lance in a serious setting with Brock, it feels a bit….one dimensional? It seems to be set up as Lance is wrong, Brock is right, and Lance gotta learn? I’d love for Brock to be in the wrong sometimes in the interaction or be pushed back in a different perspective than his own instead of Lance, with great effort, acquiescing to the reasonable request of Brock.

Jeffrey Smith

Great wrap up chapter. We see the tribe be incorporated into the league and how Brock will maintain influence with the tribe. Wouldn’t surprise me if this new council never gives up day to day power and Brock maintains a loose role of Overlord. Lance got appropriately called out for some of his bs. Which is something every leader needs. Brock actually fulfills a very needed role of being able to tell Lance what he honestly thinks of how lance is behaving. Orion is a great name and once again thanks for the chapter

fireball77

Thanks for the chapter!

NexusClown

RIP Lance/Lorelei OTP, but yeah he's got a lot of work ahead of him after all how he's been treating her.

ShinLupin

Planning to give it up. Might take a long while.

fireball77

You had Brock refer to Brandon's Battle Facility as a Gym, not sure if that's a colloquialism or an error

Eli

Thanks for the chapter! If Lance really wants to try and be with Lorelei he will have to put in the work and sincerity

SailorOfHouseThunderBird

Orion is an awesome name for Ursaluna. And out of all the Pokémon available, i really didn't expect Dewgong to be used for moon eyes like that. Shame Brock is going to be giving up the Tyranitarite. I was really looking forward to him keeping that going forward. Mega Titan is just awesome, and would be super useful as a threat to Lance, Team Aqua, or random legendaries. Might even keep Brock from getting completely dunked on by Cynthia and her Piano of Doom.

Qweku_v

Excellent chapter. Lance got straightened out somewhat. Welcome ORION!!!

ShinLupin

Diplomacy in Action, Brock being the grown-up in the room with Lance and the long awaited Ursaluna. Good Things all around. Kinda worried about Fiore, they left me with a Bad impression regarding international relationships.

Maxemuud

Cool chapter

Deltoren

Also decided not to use the bloody moon ursaluna? good choice.

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter

David Green

Orion is a great name

Deltoren

" this, if one listened to the, simply" Them?

HyruleChampion

Lovely chapter


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