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Two Minds, One Wand - Chapter Fifty Seven

🕑 Added 2023-09-22 14:55:55 +0000 UTC
Two Minds, One Wand - Chapter Fifty Seven

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uncertain

Now that I've finished the chapter. That was some great progress (/s), he upset Cho Chang, Katie Bell, and Ginny Weasley (kind of). I like the development with Susan, but I'm a bit disappointed he had to be prompted to do the right thing by Hermione.

uncertain

Also, starting chapter 49 the last name of Parvati and Padma changed from Patil to Patel.

uncertain

The first sentence already confused me. Sofia and Sophia seem to have been confused. Sofia was introduced as Helena's adoptive mother, Sophia was introduced as the Veela princess. I looked back and starting in chapter 36 the Veela princess changed names and is now also Sofia. On the other hand, the art looks amazing!

Darren Jones

Oh wow, she's hot. Great artwork

Fox in a hut

Was hoping for fleur being broken in. It feels dragged out at this point. So there are multiple plots involving harry. It would feel better if some were resolved to keep track of the plot?

vb

This might be your best artwork yet. Might just be me but most of your ai artwork seems to tend towards Asian features, and it fits beautifully on a girl who is actually Asian.

red demon

I like the picture of Cho. The quidditch match was fun. I've seen Harry jump off his broom before but I've never seen him land on one of the chaser's brooms before. So Katie cut Harry off. She does owe Harry. He got her off at their Hogsmeade visit and she promised to return the favor.

zamu

I lost it with Lee's commentary.


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