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Meanwhile at Home
🕑 Added 2015-10-20 04:11:52 +0000 UTC In the days leading up to Casey's date with Mr. Fontaine, things have been escalating between her and Sylvia. Royce has been out of the house lately doing research for his book, and Casey has been ambushing her mother at every opportunity. They're starting to learn things about each other, like how much Casey especially likes having her breasts fondled and how Sylvia melts when you kiss her neck.But these make-out sessions always end with Casey getting her hand slapped as she tries to push things further. She knows she'll never get the threesome she wants if Sylvia isn't completely on board with it, and on some days it feels like she isn't making any progress at all.
There has to be a way to speed things up.
Comments
Reinbach
Thanks! Good to know the comic is keeping you engaged!
Reinbach
I'll admit there are story elements that are a bit all over the place. In the original draft of the story Casey and Sylvia couldn't stand each other and that was a big part of the reason behind the affair. In the end I decided the original version was too dark for several reasons and started making changes. I'm not going to claim to have an airtight reason for why I flipped their dynamic into this territory, other than that I think it's hot, but I can tell you that it does fit with the finale I want to present for this first story. After that I am planning a sequel story, and I will definitely use what I learn here to ensure it's more tightly written.
Reinbach
Glad you understand where I was coming from on that one! :) I've got a lot to learn about being a writer but I know enough that if you find your readers really want to see something, you don't show it all to them right away.
Snizzlefit
You know, I'm glad I didn't commission this particular pairing after all. The wait made it much better and this isn't even full blown sex!
meiwow
I don't know, I find her fucking roice behind sylvia's back more exciting. The cheating I guess.
This. So much this. Can't wait for these two to go all the way.
