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🕑 Added 2015-10-30 03:10:40 +0000 UTC

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Snizzlefit

Oh there's no reason to change anything! What you have is perfectly fine and probably more grammatically correct anyways, I just wanted to chime in since I fancy myself a writer. And I thought about that as soon as I read the chapter. I'm in your head Reinbach!

Reinbach

Lol that she is!

Reinbach

Hey if you think what I have here is wrong enough to be worth changing let me know and I'll take your word for it. And way to call how things would go by the way. I remember last week you mentioned something about him giving her a grade.

Bob Fink

Another awesome page, that shows just how slutty she can be.

Snizzlefit

Not that it really matters now but for the purposes of dialogue I think you might have been able to get away with putting "A-" and omit the actual word entirely.

Reinbach

Thanks! I'm not really sure if it comes off as a joke but I found it pretty funny, the idea that this guy's come is dripping off her face but having to stand in a shower and talk to him would be too intimate for her.

I love how Switch chimes in at the end.