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Thank You Mama Joyce! Replacement Chapter Five
🕑 Added 2025-12-31 23:21:46 +0000 UTCI've been unhappy with the original chapter five that I posted a couple of months ago, the tone of the story was too abrupt a change, and it made my muse for the story run and hide under my bed. Fortunately she seems to like this chapter better. GRIN
Anyway, I've removed the original chapter and posted the new chapter and the two versions of the collected story in https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1_lnfuFEQWNEUeLYm0V-wrqaddNbaOUlu?usp=sharing
Happy Reading and Happy New Year!
Comments
Alun Lewis
Just finished marathon-ing through what's been posted so far....really enjoying what I've seen, though the difference between the OG 5th chapter and the revised one is pretty stark. Though I didn't hate the plot line of Catherine Madison being brought back into play...actually a plot I'm kinda surprised wasn't touched on during the series...but I will admit that the revelation of Principal Snyder had performed a DIY lobotomy on himself has me reacting in the same visceral fashion as Cordy & Xander. The revised twist being Mayor McSnake being behind the Scoobies and Joyce giving in to their kinky urges all of a sudden lands...better?...and opens up a bigger threat potential.
