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This Romantic World Page 15

🕑 Added 2018-05-18 03:04:16 +0000 UTC

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Reinbach

Hey glad you're willing to stick with her here! To be fair I did make her come across a bit thick here, since I'm still introducing her I wanted to make her personality traits obvious initially. For now I can promise there will be more to her as the story goes on.

Reinbach

I'll try to keep this scene moving along fast, hope you like how it plays out. :)

Ry

I'd love to get a commission of this dude - getting kicked in the dick by his wife. Now thats out the way, I'd like to address something about Parker and the whole "dumb" comments I am seeing here. Shes clearly naive and easily manipulated, that has been presented, but intelligence has a WIDE range. She could be academically smart but dumb as a brick in terms of common sense/people skills, she could be artistic and creative which is another form of intelligence in its own right. I think people are jumping on the "SHES DUMB" wagon way rather swiftly because we've only seen a fraction of this character and her overall story. Even if she is shown later to be as dumb as a brick in more instances throughout the story I still love her design, shes a very nice change of pace and I think its a bit unfair to colour her in one category just yet.

Walter L.

And another asshole. Will this one get his come-uppance at least, unlike that dick of a teacher?

Reinbach

Don't worry you're fine.

Angelo

Sorry if my comment came across as too negative

Reinbach

Right on thanks for the feedback. :)

Reinbach

Well in any case I think the way she comes across on this page feels right to me, so maybe it's ok if she's a little dumb on occasion.

Reinbach

That's a good idea about the booksmarts. I'll try to work something like that in.

Reinbach

Well said! XD

Reinbach

Cool! Glad it came across as I intended for you. :)

Reinbach

Glad to hear it! :)

Snizzlefit

As of this moment in the comic she mostly comes across as dumb. I think this can be made retroactively gullible if you reveal later on that he was telling the truth and just doing it in a really dumb way. Obviously if that's not the case you can still bring the intended point across other ways but that's just the first thing that comes to my head. It's still a fun page all the same and definitely a fun way to show off a character trait.

ScuzzBucket

His face and those hands in his last panel are hilarious :). The guys in this universe are all horrible liars. I still remember that guy going "I just went GAY all of a sudden!" when Casey confronted him for disappearing on her.

Angelo

There's gullible and then there's dumb. This page makes her seem like the latter lol. This dude is the worst liar ever.

ScuzzBucket

First off- holy crap, Parker's breasts look BEAUTIFUL in this update. Especially in that big panel. I'm calling them "Reinbach A-Cups" :). I love big jugs, but the smaller ones can look so pretty and perky by contrast. I forgot how good you were at drawing pouty girls. My God, that's a cute face. And her lil' "I'm not buying it" cross-armed pose is adorbz. One thing I'd suggest to make her seem less dumb is to make her book-smart, so she comes off more as a person with low Wisdom instead of Intelligence. "When Danny said that 'Mommy's moving back in with us!'" LOL :D