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Nikki and Fontaine Part One

🕑 Added 2018-02-01 02:34:25 +0000 UTC
Nikki and Fontaine Part One

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Reinbach

eventually!

alex baker

will we ever see mr fontain's entire harem?

ScuzzBucket

Depending on the state, he also risks PRISON time! If Switch/TRW takes place in real-world Washington, then it's definitely illegal (yes I googled it, lol), even if the girl is eighteen (the law says "16 and up", because anything below that is statutory rape, I guess). In many other states it's illegal, as well. Like, the law don't screw around with that. Of course, the Switchverse may operate under different rules, so I hesitate to declare anything definitively :).

ScuzzBucket

Oh, now that's very interesting. Because to me, as written, it came off like "so as soon as her boyfriend wasn't there to feel her up, she immediately decided to bone the most attractive person around", so she comes off like an uber-slut who's cheating on her boyfriend. I mean, his only crime is "touching his girlfriend repeatedly", which in the Switchverse, is hardly a major felony (compared to "having affair with stepdaughter" or "fucking several female students"- the later of which is LITERALLY a felony in most places). So he comes off way more innocent to me! Looking forward to more, and seeing how her relationship with her douchey boyfriend is explained. Not that MR. FONTAINE is a beacon of holiness by comparison to anyone :).

Reinbach

Well in theory he'd have to be careful, as every time he screws a student he risks his career. But that's never stopped him before lol.

Bob Fink

He'd be a fool to ignore her advances, what's not to like, she's a redhead and has a smokin hot body!

Reinbach

Right that was on me. I had two paragraphs all about what a little douche Brad was, but I cut them because they felt like a whole separate story. I thought implying that he couldn't last the length of a class without trying to feel up his girlfriend would present him as obnoxious enough, but I could have gone a little farther with it.

MysteryStreet

Something we decided to cut back on a little is that Brad is a bit of an obnoxious prick. Things will hopefully become more clear about her motives as we see more of her.

Reinbach

Thanks! :)

Angelo

Very nice!

Reinbach

Pretty much. I do plan on there being a few couples, but expect a lot more "open relationships" and "friends with benefits" scenarios.

ScuzzBucket

Heheh, I guess it's not SO insulting to Bria- she could just be of average intelligence. Or maybe her love triangle/breakdown affected her grades or something :). That's interesting about the cheating aspect- you just wanted everyone to have as many opportunities to have partners as you could get, and didn't want to run into the mess of having someone need to be a cheater? I can see that- it paints the cheaters in a negative light, and tends to dominate the story more than "X gets with Y, then later gets with Z" would. It probably fits better to just have everybody treat promiscuity as the default :). I mean, it IS a Pornverse.

Reinbach

Right on man more is on the way. :)

Reinbach

Well in TRW I do plan on getting more away from the "everybody cheats" mentality. That's why I scrapped the idea of Jane having a boyfriend way back when. As for Bria I guess I could have worded that differently. She's smart sure, but she's also very submissive. So that balances things out from his point of view.

David

Wow... what a lucky teacher. Really looking forward this story!

ScuzzBucket

Jesus, this guy. "Smart women frankly weren't his type". What a dickhead, lol. What does that say about poor Bria? This explains why nobody can be monogamous in the Switchverse- the second someone's with a member of the opposite sex and their significant other isn't around, their pants go into overdrive and they just HAVE to jump their bones, no matter their romantic entanglements :).


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