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This Romantic World Page 8

🕑 Added 2018-03-30 02:24:53 +0000 UTC

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Angelo

His girlfriend. That sounds so weird lol. He’s really dating his wife’s teenage daughter. What could possibly go wrong lol?

Reinbach

It would be an interesting thing to address when Royce finally comes around again, though considering who his girlfriend is I can't imagine him going long without sex lol, but you never know.

Jonoffen

You are truly too kind, sir.

Angelo

So Warren's load was only this big because he hasn't had sex in awhile, right? So if Royce ever went without sex for a long period of time I guess he'd be able to fill up a bathtub. From what we've seen with Royce so far, frequent sex hasn't made his loads any smaller. He came three time during that Casey/Bria threesome and each one could probably fill a bucket.

MysteryStreet

Exactly! So you just admitted that it was indeed, not as advertised.

ScuzzBucket

Oh wow, that is a definite improvement. I didn't mind it before, but the "dark outlines" really make the clumps "pop".

ScuzzBucket

Yeah, their pairing is interesting. Part of me wants to see more about it, but the other part recognizes that their bit of the story in "Switch" is kind of OVER and you probably don't wanna go back to Bria's entire plot thread all over again. TRW seems more like wacky comedy, so Bria's dark character arc might be out of theme now :).

Reinbach

Right on!

Reinbach

Thanks! Made some tweaks to it and now I think it strikes a balance. :)

Reinbach

Thanks! I've been looking forward to getting more into Warren's character for a while. :)

Reinbach

Great! :)

Reinbach

I'm certainly going for odd! I added some clumps to her in panel four. It's a compromise! :D

Reinbach

Well, anatomically inaccurate as it may be, I've kind of been going by the rule that bigger dicks make bigger loads. So Liz may have been surprised to see a Royce-sized load come out of Warren when his dick size is "average" for this universe.

Reinbach

I imagine Bria thinking his awkwardness was endearing, but he didn't really float her boat sexually.

Reinbach

This scene is winding down. That's one thing that will be different in TRW: shorter sex scenes but more of them.

Reinbach

She's not quite so devious lol, sounds like something Casey would do though.

Reinbach

You couldn't even see her pants in the advertisement! :o

Bob Fink

Looks great and she looks smokin hot wearing it :D

David

THAT WAS A HUGE LOAD. I really loved the 4th panel. ¡TRW just keep getting better! On the semen thing, i think you managed to work it fine. I mean, it has sense that when it touches the skin (or the clothes) the cum remains thick, but when it mixes with the sweat and saliva it can look traslucid.

Lux

So I absolutely love the dialogue here. You nailed it in my opinion because you set the reason for him not being quite the stud he's been made out to be previously. Well done!

Dean Sturtevant

Nice, love it

Jonoffen

I prefer the thick clumps - more realistic. The movement of her tits is fantastic in the first panel. Her words are... odd.

Angelo

Isn’t that a pretty normal sized load for this universe? Why is she so surprised?

ScuzzBucket

OOF- Liz's body in panel 1. Awesome. Love the extra shot on her tits. I actually laughed, because "He had EVEN MORE in him!?!" Given how the women of the Switchverse behave, I'm surprised ANY man has to masturbate. And given his ability to say exactly the incorrect thing, I'm A) surprised he ever managed Bria in the first place, and B) wondering how you managed to translate me into the Switchverse :). The splatter looks pretty good. I'm more into the thick spray on a girl than once it settles, but the "sort of see-through" look works. Word.