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This Romantic World Page 171
🕑 Added 2021-01-08 02:08:00 +0000 UTCScene complete! This was a big one and it feels good to finish. I hope you guys enjoyed it in spite of the last-minute story stitching I had to do when I wrote myself into a corner a couple of months ago. I think it worked out well in the end. It certainly made Chloe's comic debut happen sooner than it would have, and that's a plus for me.
Speaking of which: Chloe! I like to think the big bullet points about her are made clear in this page and the last one, those being that she's Isaac's stepsister and best friend, and that she obviously likes spying on people. Like Isaac, she was created for the TRW prequel VN, so if you've played that you already know all about her. I say this because I'm attempting a bit of a balancing act here: on one hand, I want to build on the characters and stories introduced in the game. But on the other, I don't want to make a comic that confuses readers who aren't interested in visual novels or just want to wait until the game is done to play it.
As always, let me know how I'm doing as I go if you would!
Comments
Reinbach
I did hear some of that on Discord as well. For now I guess it comes down to what I personally think the TRW game is about (or not about) and on my end I didn't consider this a spoiler. But there's not much more I can say in the meantime without spoiling things for real. I'll be ready to reopen this discussion when the game is done for sure.
Jake
NGL this kinda ruins the game. From the game it is much more obvious that isaac and chloe love each other, than isaac loves parker
Reinbach
;D
Reinbach
Not at present! XD
Reinbach
The theme of the comic leans towards cuteness in general I would hope. :)
Reinbach
XD
Reinbach
Great! :)
Reinbach
You may not have been wrong exactly, it will come up later in the chapter.
Reinbach
:)
Reinbach
As ever! XD
Reinbach
She does, in my head anyway. That's why the first thing she thought of was Chloe after they kissed here.
Reinbach
Thanks!
Reinbach
For sure! It will come up!
Reinbach
Thank you!
Reinbach
It would seem so! XD
Reinbach
Hey thanks for the thoughtful feedback! I hope not to disappoint as I go along with the story. :)
Reinbach
XD
Reinbach
XD
Reinbach
That is the way love triangles tend to drift in a porn world I imagine! :)
Reinbach
That will be answered when we see Chloe again later in the chapter. :)
Reinbach
Pink! XD
Reinbach
Noted! :)
Reinbach
Great! :)
Reinbach
Hope to keep you interested! :)
Reinbach
great!
Lukas West
Oh boy :p Can`t wait to see Chloe and Parker face off for Issac`s love.
Kalandros
Plot twist: she wasn’t happy.
nick
jealous chloe looks kinda hot. i wonder what kind of things she will do now. let's hope they're not sinister, but instead hold a kind of cuteness that makes us love her more!
adam
oh no 🤣
eF..cz
An interesting situation (Black Books quote :) ). Can't wait for more.
Chris Davis
Hmm, I guess I was wrong on the whole "Chole approves of Parker" thing. Still, I get the feeling that it's not that Chloe wants Issac for herself, more than she doesn't want to be replaced as his "best friend. I think it's time Chlole gets with a certain Class President's Side-kick...
Vince
Oh hell yes, lets get some chloe!
Malmedee
They certainly do be crazy.
Slaughterbug
I wonder if Parker knows Issac has banged his sepsis a few times...
Kudos707
Stepsis can some nice cake
Deano
My interpretation of Chloe and Isaac's relationship in the game was that it became romantic given that they're already best friends who were attracted to one another. I guess I'll see if she felt the same way lol
HungryOuroboros
Even if it's not my preferred ship, this feels 100% real and believable. As always, your characters feel like real people, and it makes for great reading!
Daresouma
I'm so happy for Isaac and Parker!! ^^ But at the same time... Poor Chloe T.T I just hope that there is nothing that a good time in the sack between them won't fix, in a very Romantic World way, after all, even if I (and others, of course) like Parker for Isaac, he and Chloe still have a very deep and personal bond, and not only just because they sleep with each other, I mean, as Isaac says in this page they are practically best friends and have allways been there for each other. And then, just when the three of them fix things after a really hot threesome (I hope xD) enters Chloe's mother. I'd really love seeing that, but that's just how I'd envision the situation playing out. I'm already highly anticipating the resolution of Isaac's conundrum. And don't worry Reinbach, even though I'm no professional or anything of that kind in the world of writting, I'm still quite picky about details and logical development, and even though I'm not a huge fan of the whole "despite we like/love each other we fuck with almost whomever", I still think that you deliver a very well developed and nicely written story, not only enjoyable due to your art style, but also thank to the own story. So don't worry and keep up the good work, I for one am definitively enjoy it all, both the comics and the game.
Bob Fink
Think again Issac, Chloe has a green eyed monster living inside that you just released big time. XD
Jariah Synn
I can already hear the shovel hitting the dirt...
rah
If you think the people in this story doesn't know everything there is to know about copious amounts of bodily fluids and how to.. dispose of them, I don't know what to tell you :D
Johnny Wishbone
Hopelessly in love, but in a "retarded for each other" kinda way.
ShadowSkill
That chick is in the habit of taking group cum baths. Before you put your mouth on her I hope he watched her brunch, mouthwash, and scrub her face first.
MAR
I also hope this ends up being the start of a poly relationship.
Reinbach
Thanks!
Wendsl
Based on the game I would completely agree, but you never know. I think it could swing any way
Reinbach
For what it's worth the game is planned to have multiple endings as of this writing, and which one was canonical won't revealed in the comic for a looooong time.
MAR
Love I believe, but haven’t played the game in a while.
Wendsl
Is Chloe in love with Isaac, or just possessive?
The Funny Hatter
What's the color for jealousy?
KainRezo072
10/10 great cliffhanger
Angelo
It feels a little weird seeing all this while the game is still going on. Kinda like seeing the epilogue to a story before the ending.
alex baker
i would gladly take chole over parker
Malcolm Tent
Ok so Chloe isnt exactly pleased, shes a nice girl at heart though I expect her to take it out on Parker in the bedroom. Also I wouldnt be shocked if Parker is into it and gets attached. These three are my new 0t3 lol. Cant wait to see what happens.
GregD
Yep. Yep. Yeeeeeaaap. Saw this coming a mile away. Like, the second I saw the camera, I suspected it was her. But I also knew she would *not* be happy. Good lord, the drama. (This is not me complaining!)
Blueno
Looks like Rein got his groove back! I like the story progression so far
