This Romantic World Page 133
🕑 Added 2020-05-14 23:35:29 +0000 UTCTo those who are disappointed by Ann's lack of tanlines: I did try to include them. And if she was standing upright and beneath a neutral light source, I think I could have pulled them off. But with the light coming from the side and Royce being on top of her, the extra tone of color on her breasts just made them look busy and weird. Looks like Ann does her sunbathing naked at Apex Beach!
As for the page itself, I'm wondering if this cut was too abrupt? I feel like it reads well if you go right from the last page to this one, but maybe not so much if it's been a week since you saw the last page. Hard to say, feel free to let me know if this came off as jarring.
That's all I got for now! Hope you guys like the page and are having a good week.
Comments
Kudos707
Also I hope this sex scene goes on for at least one more page!
Kudos707
Maybe a little too abrupt, I would have appreciated an extra page midway with Casey already declothing and already into it while the doctor is trying to resist or something OR convinced immediately by Royce's girth lol. Possibly something that can be included afterwards?
Reinbach
Thanks!
Reinbach
Thank you!
Reinbach
Noted, thanks for sharing! :)
Reinbach
Still in the office for sure. If I did a flashback it would all be in grey scale.
Reinbach
Probably not the next one, Elianna has hijacked the upcoming build. XD
Reinbach
Thank you! :)
Reinbach
I'd be more interested in HER insurance actually. If she gets knocked up on the job, does that count as a work related accident?
Reinbach
:D
Reinbach
Great! :)
Reinbach
My pleasure! :)
Reinbach
For sure! Those kind of shots would have been helpful I think. Leave it to me to get impatient to reach the action though. XD
Reinbach
Noted! :)
Nikuthulhu
You are amazingly talented. You are doing great art.
Reinbach
Good to hear, thanks!
Reinbach
Stick around! :)
Reinbach
XD
Reinbach
Thanks!
Reinbach
She might! :)
Reinbach
;D
Reinbach
Good to hear, thanks!
Reinbach
Well one thing I wanted to keep from Switch is that Royce still has a hard tome telling Casey "no."
Reinbach
For sure, I have a build up scene on the way. As of this writing anyhow.
Reinbach
Much appreciated! :)
Reinbach
Thank you!
Reinbach
I doubt she'll hold out long. XD
Reinbach
Good to know, thanks!
Reinbach
Thank you! I did try something a little different by putting them directly sunlight, which was a bit tricky for me. Glad it seemed to work well!
Reinbach
Noted! :)
Reinbach
Thanks! I try to mix things up more and more as I go along. :)
Reinbach
Gotcha! :)
Reinbach
Pretty much! XD
Reinbach
Thanks for sharing! :)
Reinbach
Thank you! As of this writing I have a stripping scene on the way. :)
Reinbach
Thanks!
Reinbach
Sounds like we're on the same page there! :)
Reinbach
She's on the way!
Reinbach
Thanks for sharing! :)
Reinbach
Thanks! I guess that's how I pictured it in my head.
Reinbach
You'll find out soon! :)
Reinbach
Thank you!
Reinbach
No dream fakeouts here I promise!
Reinbach
Good to hear!
Reinbach
Cool! Glad it works as intended when read in immediate order.
Reinbach
Good to hear it then! :)
David
Yes, i felt the cut was abrupt, but mostly because the week in between each other. Seeing them side by side, they work really great, almost as a sitcom, especially since the last panel is Ann surprised by Cass reaction. I love it.
Ray Ishimura
The page its self is Amazing but the transition was a bit abrupt because it feels like there are just one or two panels missing before this Page but 1 page more would have been to much.
Ry
Won't lie. Her not being a blinding orange is 100% better for her. So is this a flashback of when they were together? Or is this in her office with Casey? I'm not quite sure.
ScuzzBucket
I gotta say, this lady is a highly-unprofessional therapist, lol. I "got" the quick scene transition, though it's much more clear when remembering what the last panel is- I think the 6-7 day delay may have confused some folks. The doctor has some lovely breasts- while she doesn't read as "MILF" to me (I always need lines under the eyes to indicate at least some form of aging), she's got a fun design and good proportions.
MysteryStreet
So... does this cost extra? is it covered by Royces insurance provider?
Naelyth
I think the transition is great when read in the same "movement". Personnaly I was waiting for this page so I have the previous one always in my mind so I think it's good :)
Daniel Reyes-Bukowski
No matter what at the end of the day the sex will never disappoint, awesome page been looking forward to this. Thanks a lot π₯
George
I think it works, but you _almost_ need an in-between page that hints at what's happening in a few frames without being as explicit as this one. A view from outside of the office, with vague shapes through the glass. A closeup of Casey's fist clenching some fabric (her skirt? her panties?). Ann's parted ankles in the air in the foreground, her empty desk in the shot beyond. But I ain't no artist. I still think this is great work.
Jariah Synn
Abrupt, maybe throw in a "Ten seconds later" caption. Otherwise glad to see Anne getting shwrecked. XD
Dorian Alton
I would saw that it feels appropriately abrupt. It was a good place for a cut. As mentioned elsewhere, it would be nice to see Casey's reaction right away, but that is the nature of a weekly release. I'm sure we'll see her next time, and on later read-throughs, it won't feel like it is missing.
Scholarly
I am kinda disappointed that i cant see Casey looking at it. Can we expect it in the next pages?
That black guy
Gilligan cut to people fucking
Blueno
Kinda abrupt... BUT that depends on next scene. Fuckin' great scene tho!
frank barry
Yes, it's abrupt, but it works. I'm glad you edited out the extra, especially if it slows the story down. We know all knew this was coming, so it doesn't leave anything left out. So what exactly is Casey going to do now??? Can't wait for next week.
frank barry
She must know the nurse if she goes to Apex Beach.. (hint, hint). People get naked spray tans too.
Malcolm Tent
Cant wait for Casey to jump in.
Snizzlefit
I do think it's rather abrupt but I don't think that's a bad thing. The way the previous page ended lends itself to a sudden ramping up. And while it may not play as comically as intended across multiple weeks it's super easy to go back and see the previous page. So it's not really anything worth being concerned over.
Angelo
Doesn't seem like it took much convincing for them to fuck which is why I'm surprised that it hasn't happened before.
Lord Washington
I do like having build up, to the βmain event.β
korraspats
Fucking hot, your fluids are such a turn on!!
Squid Hills
Damn, that's hot.
michael
I'm just surprised Casey could resist joining in.
Lord of Nightmares
I do think there should have been an intermission page with the pair being a bit awkward before going all in
HungryOuroboros
Did you do something different with the shading for this page? Because it looks absolutely FANTASTIC. The illusion of 3d, especially in panels 1 and 2 for Ann's breasts, is absolutely breath taking. You've been getting consistently better for years now, but it really jumped out at me this time. Bravo, Reinbach :)
Jeremy Joanes
As a transition it's fine but if it were me I would have uploaded this page and page afterwards for better flow
Duodragoon
I was expecting a page where Royce was gonna try and de escalate the upcoming sex before saying fuck it ( kinda similar to when they had the threesome with Bria ) but it is good to change up the routine to keep it fresh.
rah
Nah it worked, but the second to last panel on the previous could have been Royce with ".....", and then the last is the Doc's face like whu-oh..
The Funny Hatter
"I want to change... But the temptation is too strong!"
NomadicWanderer
No problem at all on the tanlines... just means she likes sunning in the nude, which is A-Ok π. I personally like the transition, although maybe a comical "10 minutes later" caption would have smoothed it out a bit. In any event... hot psychologist getting boned is ALWAYS ππ.
Jon
I mean the only reason I'm saying it was abrupt is because I wanted to see Ann get undressed because I'm into that. But ignoring that well done smash cut!
Vernacular Ham
Holy shit this is well drawn.
Licorice Lain
The answer is no, the cut is not abrupt at all. The intermediary dialogue and warm up are lef tto the audience's imagination and the most is made of the limited real estate that the comic medium offers. Not everything has to be shown.
Bob Fink
I like how this page turned out, the only thing I see missing is Casey sitting in the background watching. XD
Nikuthulhu
I would have had 2 more panels. First a cut back to Ann going "I mean hypothetically speaking..." then the next panel shows Royce giving her a look like "are you serious?" then the cut to this. But that's just my opinion. It's still works the way it is. π
Gavin Miller
If it was a show or movie, that's exactly how it'd be shot with Casey's set up line.
Slaughterbug
I agree, a bit of transition would've helped. Its quite the jump to go from surprise blush to brains fucking out in one transition. Also, id love to see how Casey is handling being the spectator for once...
Karmagik
I think the hard cut works great. Also, top notch titty sucking in panel 2!
S.R.R115
So this is cannon, it isn't in Casey's mind? Jose checking, love the page as well btw
GregD
And no, I dont think the cut was too abrupt. Any more than those two page before and after mating press comics are too abrupt. β€π
GregD
Yes. Yes. Yes. I approve.
RivEx
It might be a bit jarring because I thought I missed a page, but now reading them together it is funny going from her suprised face to a hardcore sex scene.
Kalerockat
It could've done with a bit of transitional dialogue but i was very much waiting for the page, so no actual complaints but a comment