This Romantic World Page 141
🕑 Added 2020-07-10 00:01:09 +0000 UTCOn to the final scene of this chapter! A few things to unpack: I attempted not one but two mirror shots here, and can't be certain how well I pulled them off. My tactic was to just put two identical models in the same pose across from each other in Design Doll. I think it worked? Let me know.
Secondly we get another milf for Isaac's calendar here; Abbey's mom, Paige McKay. She represents a bit of a landmark moment in my history of character design, as she's got the first body type I've done that I'd describe as "chubby." (As opposed to just "built thick" like Jane and Millie.) Be curious as to how she goes over with my particular audience here.
Lastly, the stuffed animals on Abbey's wall represent a menagerie of failed cuddly mascots created during my teen years where every two weeks I came up with a new comic that was a scarcely altered rip off of whatever anime I was into at the time. Also one ninja turtle, just because. I know you can't see them all that well here, I'll try to fit in a clearer shot later on.
Hope you guys like the update and are having a good week!
Comments
Daniel Reyes-Bukowski
Awesome can’t wait tho 🙌🏼 I appreciate the work of art 🔥
Reinbach
It says "Purple is a Secondary Color" a shamefully bad riff on my part of the lesbian love story "Blue is the Warmest Color." My shame is great.
Joel Fitzmaurice
I'm just curious what the poster means.
Reinbach
Great! :)
Reinbach
Great! It's on the way. :)
That black guy
Oh I thought I posted but I like them Extra THICC so Paige is my thing
tupperward
definitely excited to see more of abbey's mom
Emmett
I'm happy about your answer, and I'm going to message you directly to discuss this some more. I hope you don't mind
Licorice Lain
Lesbians squared
Reinbach
:)
Reinbach
Cool! Hope she keeps that interest as we go along.
Reinbach
Great! :)
Reinbach
Thanks! And as for Kayden, I hadn't thought of him as a gender non-conformist exactly, largely because I don't know enough about the topic, and may inadvertantly present it in a way that may come off as insensitive or even ignorant. As such I think of Kayden in porn terms: he's simply a bisexual femboi at the end of the day.
Reinbach
Hey great! And Sylvia will definitely be back, though expect her to appear in the game before the comic.
Reinbach
Gay2 even!
Reinbach
Great! :)
Reinbach
And how! :)
Reinbach
XD
Reinbach
Thanks for reserving! :)
Reinbach
;D
Reinbach
Great! Nice to see she's going over so well already. :)
Reinbach
Cool! :)
Reinbach
Thanks!
Reinbach
As ever, I have the general beats planned out but I'm free to alter the little things as I go. :)
Reinbach
Thanks for noticing! I liked the contradiction myself. :)
Reinbach
It never worked for me. XD
Reinbach
That will come up! :)
Reinbach
Maybe! XD
Reinbach
Hard to say. Even if I had enough milfs, would you guys really want a calendar that has none of the younger characters?
Reinbach
Glad to hear it! :)
Reinbach
Yeah, definitely. :)
The BRM
Will we get a virgin banging a dude for his first time at any point?
Reinbach
Glad you think so!
RivEx
Abbey's mom, has got it going on
Reinbach
It's largely a readability function I've adapted over time. Whenever I have a medium shot in a small panel, I give the characters anime faces so that their expressions can still be read clearly in case the reader is viewing the comic on a small screen, like a phone.
Reinbach
Well I was going for cartoonish horror, so extreme was my goal. But since you brought it up I did make her irises slightly larger and I think it still conveys what I wanted just fine. :)
Reinbach
:)
eF..cz
Mirror shots are perfect. Maybe Abbeys irises in 2nd last picture could be a bit bigger. I know that the expression is aimed to show her eyes extremely widen, but they seem to me just a bit too small.
nick
thick redhead milf. yes.
schtickle
Paige says no drugs and alcohol, which is fine, but I bet she squeals like a banshee. I'm down for more of Paige.
SarcasticWanderer
Love a woman with her particular... body type 😏. And Abbey is adorable
Doorknob22
Last panel: What does paining a person without the nose signify? Strong emotions?
Giuseppe
Paige's design is dope. Keen to see what happens with her ;)
KaijuWhite
Betcha Paige squeals during six
Emmett
Awesome page. Really glad to see the first "chubby" character. Diverse body types FTW! Are you planning on incorporating more gender non-conforming characters (like Kayden who is potentially non-binary right? but not canonically as far as I'm aware)? Both of the mirror panels look great. I'm especially impressed by the foreshortening in the bird's eye view panel. Nice job, RB!
JC
Freckles
Daniel Reyes-Bukowski
Well done with the second panel of the second mirror shot. Also I read switch the prequel comic you mentioned to me and it was absolutely fantastic I’m all caught up with the story and all. And I have to say I think abby’s mom is a well designed chubby mom and hopefully we see something out of her. But I definitely cannot express out of all the women you drew Sylvia has to be my #1 fav design I have a feeling your keeping her return as something grand. I can’t wait to see more of this chapter!!!
Licorice Lain
It is time..for the gay. :D
Stan Hanks
Like the angry MILF look.
Unborn Roderick
Gosh sake! A bunch of Kissed-by-fire-girls 😍😍😍
rah
I’d say “Dummy Thicc” comes to mind. For some reason?
Bob Fink
Very well done on the mirror shots, you nailed it. I agree Abby looks very much the seductress as to the norm. Now mom, I'm not going to pass judgement there until I see more of her but first glance she is the typical mother next door.
Kudos707
Oooh I can't wait until that plump mommy gets some action of her own! I hope she likes em young hehe
JB
It took me a second on the mirror shot because of the apparent height difference in the perspective of the shot when you just glance at it, but it was only for a second. I think it works just fine. As for mom... short, chubby, huge breasted redhead? A+ from me.
TotesNotThea
It's really good! Congrats! Two things for me stand out in this scene, the last two panels - the mom shock face and the disapproving mom face before entry is even allowed.
alex baker
All of this is adorable
Slaughterbug
I think the mirror shots worked out great. So.... how much of this scene do you have planned out? Because SOOOOooooo much could happen...
ScuzzBucket
A BBW AND a butt shot in a Reinbach comic! True, appreciated rarities! Abbey looks hot in that first panel, too- seductive and sexy as opposed to the flummoxed weirdo she normally is, like in panel 4, lol.
The Funny Hatter
Ah, yes. I, too, remember times of rehearsals for the future to come that involves talking to one's crush.
Malcolm Tent
Lol Abby is going to be drooling over those shorts all night. Still sad Royce isnt in this one. Also hope Abbys room is soundproof or her mom is gonna have a real uncomfortable night I'm betting lol.
The Funny Hatter
Indeed. Quite a shame...
Jariah Synn
*Shock Face* Mom! I like that she's a short stack and she's so cute. It would be a shame if somebody messed up that cute face and red hair. 😏