This Romantic World Page 147 (Revised)
🕑 Added 2020-08-14 03:10:15 +0000 UTCEDIT: Well since posting this page publicly I've gotten some lengthy comments explaining how wrong my comic panel placement was on the original version. Right or wrong, one thing is clear: I confused enough readers to justify a revision, so here we are. I think this new version is a bit more cluttered to look at, but it should be easy to clearly follow the sequence now.
My thanks to everyone who commented on my previous post about the page running late! Hope the art looks ok, sometimes it's easy for me to miss mistakes in situations like this. If anything looks off let me know, and I'll make tweaks tomorrow.
As for the page itself, pretty straight-forward here I think lol. Abbey knows she's got Casey on the hook now, and is starting to get a little smug about it.
Comments
Reinbach
Still? The general consensus I got since the revision was that it was easier to follow now.
frank barry
So she takes them off, then puts them back on, right? Like a tease? That's how it reads to me (left to right). Anyway, we get the point, on to important things, like Casey-Abbey business time.
Reinbach
Glad to hear it! :)
Reinbach
May be! XD
Reinbach
Thanks! I was really happy with how that came out myself. XD
Reinbach
Glad to hear this stood out to you! :)
Reinbach
Also I fear that Royce wouldn't fit in her lol. XD
Reinbach
I'm not saying you'll never see her get banged by a guy, but she's all about Casey for now.
Reinbach
I think you're right! :)
Reinbach
XD
Reinbach
Stay tuned! :)
Emmett
I got that intent on my second look, but initially I was confused by the layout too. Far from a serious problem, though. I kind of like when an unconventional layout asks me to look more thoughtfully at the page as a whole. A bit of friction in the reading process isn't the end of the world, I think
Emmett
Abbey's pretty not into men, and I'm good with that
Licorice Lain
Actually, what happened is that I read "I" as "You", so I thought Casey was trying to kick Abbey out of her own room.
Pol McGee
I mean it. Been a fan since I first read “In the Kitchen”. Little sentimental towards that.
Reinbach
Not at this point! XD
Reinbach
I changed it so Casey couldn't quite get out the word "leave" to make it more clear. :)
Reinbach
Great! I hope to keep your interest then. :)
Reinbach
Awesome! :)
Reinbach
XD
Reinbach
:D
Reinbach
Thanks! That actually came from somewhere. There was this old hentai called Angels in the Court. There was this evil volleyball coach who had this hot teenage sidekick. He would always gesture wildly when he spoke and accidentally grope her, upon which she would make that Abbey face there and fall over. Fun stuff. XD
Kudos707
Casey has grown a lot so I hope she doesn't regress just for Abbey, but I do like Abbey's firm ass!
rah
To paraphrase a wise doctor, Abbey’s going to fuck around and turn (Casey) back to the old (Casey)!
Reinbach
We've hit all kinds of hurdles this week that I'll get into later, but expect the early test release for the higher tiers in the next couple days and the full release next week.
NSDB
whats the ETA on the next game update?
Reinbach
Sounds like what i was attempting visually here didn't exactly work. That bottom left panel is meant to be the final one. I was hoping that the reader's eye would be naturally drawn to panel three, and then Abbey's dialog would draw them into panel four and then the final one. Looks like i flubbed it if readers are confused I'm afraid.
ScuzzBucket
haha, Abbey has such a cute little bum. Abbey's excited little "Hah!" from getting Casey to touch her boob is excellent, too.
Angelo
I love that first panel lol. Abbey's joyful reaction to Casey touching her breast is awesome.
Blueno
I am also confused by this. Not sure if it's a tease or the next strip will elaborate further.
Zachary Adams
This is a really nice page. Gorgeous art, and I really respect Abbey saying (not in so many words) "stop trying to protect me from myself and let's have the fun we both want!" I have been on both sides of that equation and it's eminently relatable.
Slaughterbug
Cue porno music.
Daniel Reyes-Bukowski
I love how abbey is teasing and playing around with Casey I do wonder how it’ll all end now
Chris Davis
I think Casey needs to introduce Abbey to Royce...
GregD
Abbey knows how to push buttons.
Bob Fink
I really don’t think Casey has a chance in hell of resisting Abbey. :D
Licorice Lain
Nevermind, I misread the text. Still was a funny though.
Fenix Feniks the sassy serpent
I have been really eager to see the continuation since the last page.
Pol McGee
😳 Worth it
Jariah Synn
Bullet D- Nope that there's a machinegun! Casey can't dodge them all! Abbey going full @#$&!!!
EpicMorgana32
oh lawd. i dont know how anyone could try to deny that. god damn
alex baker
Wait did Abbey just pull her panties down to show of how wet she is only to pull them up to show off her ass? Abbey is not playing fair.