This Romantic World Page 332
🕑 Added 2023-12-01 06:50:09 +0000 UTCThis chapter continues to bounce around and attempt to juggle more characters than any before it. Can I successfully tie all this together in a cohesive way when the time comes?....No, seriously. I'm asking. In any case I'm glad to have Elianna and Jane's past finally touched on in the main comic. The idea of foreshadowing that Jane would already know about Elianna's little turn-ons such as slow unbuttoning was the aim here.
Hope you guys like the page. This new lighting style has proven to be a bit of a bear to maintain, consistency-wise, between pages. I actually had to just eyeball a lot of the lighting to match the last page here. I'm doing my best to iron out the kinks as I go. Let me know what you think!
Comments
Samuel Sowell
you welcome
Reinbach
Well put! :)
Reinbach
Let's hope not?
Reinbach
Noted! XD
Reinbach
Thank you!
Reinbach
Interesting! :)
Reinbach
I'll do my best to make the side stories more distinct and less confusing in the future! :)
Reinbach
Hasn't gotten longer since her last appearance, not on purpose anyway. XD
Reinbach
Thanks!
Reinbach
Yep! Mr. Fontaine is back! :)
Reinbach
Wouldn't put it past her! XD
Reinbach
Glad you like Jane but as for who Bria was texting, it wasn't Casey! :O
Reinbach
She's trouble indeed! XD
Reinbach
I'll take the comparison! :D
Reinbach
;D
Reinbach
It is! Which is a shame because he remains my favorite character to write dialog for. XD
Reinbach
Thanks for the good faith! :)
Reinbach
For sure, don't worry we'll switch back to Elianna here pretty quick. These two scenes are meant to tie together so I'll be going back and forth at pretty close intervals.
The Funny Hatter
Try to lock up the beast, the beast gets horny.
GregD
Quick warning: might wanna be prepared for a coming Patreon purge of All NSFW content.
NKL
Don’t mind transitions like this one :)
Lord Washington
Ah. Thanks
Angelo
The shower scene is a separate ongoing story for the Monday strips that takes place before the current comic scene.
llCDll
The lighting and facial expressions look on point. Good stuff this chapter for sure!
Licorice Lain
When the Casey appearance feels like cockblocking.
Lord Washington
Eh, I was pretty thrown off with the sudden cut to the shower scene that alliana interrupted. Was that supposed to be there? I couldnt find it in the website
HungryOuroboros
I'm pretty sure this is the teacher that Casey's been messing around with since the original Switch comic. His name escapes me at the moment, unfortunately.
HungryOuroboros
Is Casey's hair getting longer? Or is it just the angle? I could seriously get behind a wild haired Casey honestly.
Angelo
“Shut up. I’m still cool and sexy.” I love that line 😆
ShadowSkill
Oh? Are we about to meet Bria’s dad or brother cock first?
Squid Hills
I like to think that between panel #2 and panel #5, Jane deliberately moved her hair in front of her face so she could look more evil.
Chris Davis
Man! That look from Jane is delicious! I guess I shouldn't be surprised that Casey would fall back on Mr. Fontaine, since there's zero caring about him, just needing the release with no attachments. I think you've done an amazing job with the last few pages and I don't see any issues to comment on. Looking forward to see how this all plays out! (side note: I guess I was wrong about who Bria was texting and it is Casey afterall)
Graci
Jane looks like an amazing blend between pure evil and femme fatale! She never up to no good hahaha
MAR
This is starting to have some subtle ‘midsummer nights dream’ vibes, lots of plot lines all lurching forward in their own directions, interconnected but not directly. +1 vote for Jane seducing Elianna followed by months of trying to get her back leading to a tearful and genuine Jane confessing she lover her and only her.
Slaughterbug
I see your plan now jane. You wanna get some elianna action now that she's all grown up.
ScuzzBucket
The "Evil Veronica Lake Pose" with the hair hiding part of Jane's face is dead-on, haha. I am liking that Elianna does have the occasional kinks- it'd be hard NOT to, watching as much anime as she does. And there's Derek just blankly watching the show, lol. And I do believe that is our first Fontaine sighting in around three years!
Samuel Sowell
good work an you can bring everything together I can see it happening.
alex baker
Casey is always good but I really want more Eliana. Also hope Casey's wife ware from the cover comes up