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This Romantic World Page 336
🕑 Added 2024-01-05 07:50:50 +0000 UTCAnd we're back with more TRW! :D
Having written scripts for both comics and a visual novel, I can say what defines comic dialog is that it has to be tight as hell by comparison. Between the desire to keep the pacing snappy and the physical confines of limited space on the page, there truly isn't room for a single wasted word.
This wasn't anything I didn't already know, but MAN has that concept just been drilled into my forehead while attempting to juggle so many characters in one scene. Hopefully it will come together well in the end here. In the meantime please let me know what you think of the page and how things are coming along!
Comments
Reinbach
Possibly! XD
Reinbach
Thank you!
Reinbach
I'll take it! :)
Reinbach
Stay tuned if you would! ;D
Reinbach
You won't be waiting quite that long! :D
Reinbach
That is the aim here, yes! Ellie takes longer to warm up than the average porn character. XD
Reinbach
Love it. XD
Reinbach
Hey thanks for noticing! I do my bets to punch-up/simplify shapes in long distance shots. :)
Reinbach
XD
Reinbach
:)
Reinbach
;D
Alejandro Garcia
That shaved head girl is super hot, and Eliana is gonna explode from horny here
llCDll
We're back! A very fun page. Morgan's face in the last panel is amazing
HungryOuroboros
Strip clubs have never really been my thing, but I am HERE for Elianna's reactions
Slaughterbug
Lapdances are a great cure for depression. Who's the new girl? And do we get to see her ease Morgan's pain with those giant boobs?
Chris Davis
Annnnd Jane Strikes Again! GO JANE! I guess it's time for Bria to have a talk with Royce? I would guess Casey is still "indisposed" at the moment. Finally, I love the "Big Hurt Eyes" on Morgan (at least, that's what I think they are). Welcome Back, and as always, I can't wait for next week!
The Funny Hatter
I wonder if all that pent up sexually tension will make her burst out her clothes, like the Hulk.
GregD
Intriguing. First of all, first time we've seen a butch bald girl. Kudos, love the tape over nipples and the whole look. Also, some things start to make sense now. What excites Eli is proper pacing. Girl needs foreplay. Slowness. Buildup. She has a bad reaction mostly to sex that gets down to brass tacks too quickly. Makes almost too much sense.
Squid Hills
Ellie is horny, but she's trying hard to act like she's not horny, which only makes her seem even more horny.
ScuzzBucket
Yeah I think the only way around the tightness of the dialogue is random stuff like "Walls of Text" (Something*Positive would frequently put whole damn ESSAYS on one panel), which tend to look ugly and obscure the art... in that case you'd probably be able to get away with 2 comics a day cuz of the space saved on art, but it's weird for a porn comic to drop word-bombs like that XD also... god dang- "your arms are very toned!". I see the situation has warped Elianna's sense of decorum and caused her to just spout off whatever she's thinking. And thus she's said maybe the first thing about a person's appearance in the whole strip thus far! Also again DANG Holly's hips in the top right corner. Interesting how even with the big outlines and comparatively less detail than a "full figure drawing" their shapes are easily read and can look hot.
ShadowSkill
Remember folks, you can always turn down a stripper and forget they exist 30 seconds later. You deserve a stripper that has hair. It’s practically a civil right.
alex baker
I'm curious to see where this will lead Elianna
Daniel
Can't wait to see what lap dances are like in TRW!
