This Romantic World Page 349
🕑 Added 2024-03-29 21:35:33 +0000 UTCThanks for waiting, everyone! It's been one hell of a week, but I'm finally more or less recovered and functional again.
Almost 350 pages of a sex comic and I've somehow never drawn a lip biting kiss before. Hope I pulled it off well enough. As for everything else, I know I often detail what I'm trying to convey from a narrative point in this space but this time I'd just like you to tell me what you think if you would. Did this kiss go how you thought it might? Do the reactions, expressions, and dialogue feel like they belong? As always the feedback is appreciated.
Comments
Hunter_of_the_HandCocks
i saw this in my phone the other day, but now that i logged onto patreon through my PC for the first time in months i can see it in an upscaled resolution. and i just noticed she's dripping. now i wanna go back and see the rest of the story .
TotesNotThea
There also seems to be something dripping down her thigh! ;-)
Reinbach
;)
Reinbach
Thanks! :)
Reinbach
Thanks for noticing! :)
Reinbach
Thank you!
Reinbach
Awesome! :)
Reinbach
Not a bad state to be in! :)
Reinbach
Hey she's just as aroused and she's enduring! XD It's just not quite as obvious on her.
Reinbach
She used to date a lot before her lewdness crusade started, but yeah this will be her first one in awhile.
Reinbach
Well played! :)
Reinbach
High fives!
Reinbach
Glad to hear it! :)
Reinbach
XD
Reinbach
Well with Tenma she was mortified that she lost control of herself. In this case it was more like she gave in, rather than lost it.
Reinbach
That may come up! :)
Reinbach
Thanks!
Reinbach
Oh yeah he's been waiting for this one. XD
Reinbach
Nice! XD
Reinbach
Glad to not be out of surprises yet then! XD
Reinbach
That they are! :)
Reinbach
;D
Reinbach
Hey thanks for that comparison! :)
Reinbach
Great! :)
James Benthall
As a weeb myself I’m just hype to see one in action
Reinbach
This ship is just getting started! :)
Reinbach
:)
Reinbach
I hate when that happens. I fixed it of course but the flawed version was what was sent to everyone's email. X(
Reinbach
Beats Morgan the cock biter I suppose. XD
Reinbach
Much appreciated! :)
Reinbach
Thank you!
Reinbach
Nice! XD
Reinbach
Elianna won't go down that easily I'm afraid! XD
Reinbach
It is! :)
Reinbach
:)
sharpgladius
Like, nothing wrong with the others in the comic but it’d be cool not to have this one implode and we could see healthy relationships in both practices
sharpgladius
What if we kept a healthy monogamous relationship that didn’t have to crash and burn as sort of a contrast to all of the rest of the world.
Vince
Also i love that they’re smiling at Kayden
Deano
Loving the subtle dribble down her legs lol
Graci
For a second on the previous page I thought Elianna was going to Knee Derek in the balls for his erection, but I'm pleasantly surprise to see this going so well. Also as usual, expression are amazing, and the lip bite... amazing too, specially being the first one!
MechaBlerd
It. Was. PERFECT.
Vince
I am… intrigues and aroused
Vylon Delta
I mean I’m VERY impressed with Eliana’s character growth, but she’s just gonna leave Derrick like that? Gonna have to revoke some respect points 🫤
Slaughterbug
Kiss looked hot. And the lip bit was *chef kiss* Sooo.... will this be eliannas first date... ever? With a willing boy...
Squid Hills
Gawd dayum. I totally called it!
Merjia
Kayden is exactly me right now omg. 🥰🥰🥰🥰💕💕💕💕
AJ
I think we all feel a little like Kayden in this moment
ShadowSkill
Did we just see an in comic Doppler Effect?
ScuzzBucket
okay I was expecting Elianna to be mortified at her lack of decorum instead of giggling at what she'd just done, lol. Her giggling as a result is definitely adorbz, though.
Chris Davis
Awesome Page, Rein! I love how you show that they are both aroused, but are non-chalant about it. I'm also happy that Kaiden is happy for his best friend! Curious where they'll go on their date?
Phil Token
Hot kiss and lots of excitement from both of them love the page
HungryOuroboros
I'm glad Kayden is happy and not jealous :)
Jon
Im Kayden right now. At long last lol
Angelo
You definitely subverted my expectations with this scene. I was expecting something to go wrong.
MstrJerby
Lul her nipples are hard
Mark W
I get the feeling that Elianna is a bit of a pent up volcano, but her need to follow the rules limits her ways of venting off pressure so to speak. We might just be getting to see her erupt in the near future..
Widil
I love how it looks like one of the most « true » love story of TRW. It’s like they were meant for each other but the stars were not aligned so far. Makes me think of Han and Leia.
Epocseer
Yes!!!! Also that last panel, fucking sent me 🤣🤣🤣🤣
721shadow
pleaseeeeeeee don't sink this ship ! I'm all for it 🙌
UltraZachiel
Eeeeeeeeeeee!
Deita
My only criticism is "You really surprised me me there". This was amazing and I'm waiting for more of these two (hopefully sooner than later)!
Licorice Lain
Elianna the lip biter
AlienBrain
I really didn't know what to expect from this relationship. Just happy it's happening. The lip bite looks great 🫦 and her blush afterwards was adorable 😍.
Dutch Jackson
Well done sir 😊👍🏻
TotesNotThea
Love It! I can hear the squeee from here!
Lord Washington
I was half-expecting it to cut to them renting that hotel and them finding out about Casey and her teacher.
The Funny Hatter
I think that's the first time seeing a canonical lip-bite in this series.
James Benthall
👀