Patrefans
Slayer Anderson from patreon
Slayer Anderson patreon

Entrepreneurial Spirit - Chapter 1

🕑 Added 2024-01-06 16:09:53 +0000 UTC

Comments

Nevets309

Nice love it, shopkeeper stories are great and the Martian was quite a surprise

Slayer Anderson

Functionally speaking, there's no actually difference between 'infinite' and 'extremely large, but finite' as far as the story is concerned. If you want to read it as an unreliable narrator making claims to boost their reputation to their customers, feel free to.

Caliburn0

I disagree. A story about a single person doing ordinary things is fine, but when you go into detail about the setting and it's infinite, especially in the form of splitting timelines, then its the ultimate blow of fridge logic. You dont *have* to think about the infinite nature of the multiverse and the pointlessness of any event. Similarly you don't *have* to consider the fact that Batman *definitely* killed the guy he brutally smashed into a wall, but it's the kind of thing that just makes a story worse, and unlike gratuity it doesn't really serve a purpose. You could have a story about a multiversal magi-tech store in a non-infinite multiverse. You could say the character you're writing about doesn't have infinite copies doing infinite things an infinite amount of times for all infinity backwards and forwards in time and the story would only benefit for it.

Slayer Anderson

Inasmuch as the introduction is about 'counting things,' it's also really not meant to be read as any sort of mathematical equation, just an extremely vague and literary adaptation of the theme of sets and subsets of infinity as a broad concept. IE: I understand that it's 'wrong' on a technical level, but I don't actually have any real interest in being 'right' given that what I've put down is more of a monologue-style conversation piece than a technical explanation.

Ryune

By that same logic, no story about a single man could ever mean anything on a world with 6 billion lives on it. It's not infinite but it certainly makes that one person insignificant. No, the Infinity is only set dressing here. The world of the story seems to be exclusively limited to a single storefront, fantastical as it is, and the people who find it.

Slicedtoad

So, this is kind of nitpicky but your definition of infinite is wrong. What you've described is a type of infinite. Not sure what the name would be since an all-inclusive set isn't really a coherent math concept AFAIK. Infinity has flavours. The set of all positive whole numbers is a 'countable infinity'. The set of all real numbers (so, including 0.1, 0.11, etc) is 'uncountably infinite'. There are others I think? It's been a while since I learned this stuff. Look it up on youtube if you want something more detailed. But, more relevant to the story, an infinite multiverse could be as simple as an infinite set of: -copies of the same universe -progressively larger universes that are otherwise the same -universes that always have humans in them eventually but in different times/places/histories You can always (I think) add a new axis along which a 'new' infinity exists. So, an infinite exact copy set + an infinite progressive size set would give you a two-axis infinity. There's actual terminology for this that I don't remember. Not that you have to change the story, but infinity is actually a pretty heavily mathed concept.

Caliburn0

The problem with infinity is that its just... uninteresting. It is, as a concept, as empty as zero, and even less engaging. A story isn't defined by its possibilities. It's defined by its limits. If the laws of reality change so easily, if literally anything can and does happen there can be no stakes.

ZloGlaZ

So far it looks good!

ZloGlaZ

Can you share a few?

Raymond Alderman

Thanks! I've been enjoying stories in the multiverse shopkeeper genre and it's nice to see one by an author I already like

Orchamus

Always up for a good multiverse shopkeep story

Darkarma

I'm not sure where this is going, but I will say I'm interested in finding out, so more please?

Adam Daw

Your rigor and approach to a multiverse shop? I can dig it.

Jackson Waddle

This looks interesting. Probably going to be episodic with our "valiant entrepreneur" helping various characters for a price. I've seen a few similar things as one-off omakes or brief scenes but an entire story about this sort of thing seems really cool, especially if he ends up acquiring some employees to help him out, plus he might be able to not just provide goods, but also services, which would give an excuse to get involved in story plots.

Aesh

I'll be honest was not expecting a story to feature "The Martian". My favorite book and one of my favorite movies.

Aeonstorm

Hmm interesting, curious about where this would go.

Slayer Anderson

Here's a thing. Doubtful if I'll continue, but it was in my head, now it's in your eyes. Results for the monthly vote are... exactly the same. More main story Industrious coming up soon.


More Creators