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Industrious Chapter 15!
🕑 Added 2022-12-06 11:37:37 +0000 UTCMy hand is still a little messed up, mainly due to the stitches pulling when I stretch my fingers the wrong way, but I'm getting them out at the end of the week so I should be back up to my regular typing speed soon.
Next up will be a Semper Quest update for my Code Geass SV guys and then I'll likely have another Industrious ready for the weekend. Now that we've gotten some intrigue and fluff out of the way, we're back to the normal stuff with a Tenten & Yakumo training session up next.
I hope everyone enjoys the update and I thank everyone once again for all of your support. It really means the world to me, so thank you again.
Comments
Esp
A beaver works as a spirit animal for him. I guess he probably doesn't have the chakra if they turn out to be a crafting themed summon. Has he been signing his work at all? A beaver could work for a symbol. I can see where he's coming from with Satsuki. Like, you could take Satsuki apologizing about her mother as her implying she is going along with a ruse to protect her feelings regarding the pizza. Kota clicks with her way too well, though. Satsuki has shown intent to set up a more even relationship once she's got her own job, too. I guess we don't see if she has her own admirers to compete with him, yet. Otherwise I don't see her cooling off anytime soon.
Alexander O'Brien
Two beavers are better then one, da ra ra ra ra, Two beavers are better then one, there twice the fun, ask anyone :D Something tells me his going to be shanghai'd into being the 3rd member of their team lol Puppy dog eyes will be involved ๐
Bob Saget
Few things. The beaver plush, because he has brown hair and builds things. But, also because he's going to be getting beaver (pussy) in the future? The Chakra Metal charge. Was it done now, in part, because Tenten will be graduating soon and he plans to give her a full on chakra blade? Fooling himself. He seems to be doing it less now that he has connections and is explicitly a known factor. But he's still saying "if I go out and become a technological hermit" instead of making more solid plans for what he should do instead.
Yichi Zhang
How about male Sakura with a crush on Naruko, just to complete the genderbend triangle?
Tom
man if Kota knew that once he is out of Konaha then its a open season on him he would revise his plan
Slayer Anderson
I'll look into it, but this may just force me to make a new $5 tier for anyone who wants correction privileges. I'm not sure what the fix will be, but it's very irritating to me as well.
Eibon Alain
Finally! I don't know what I did to my google drive that didn't show any of the new chapters, but hey, I got it working and it's fucking worth it. Je, whoever the third member of group seven is, he has my pity.
Gabriel510
Hey have you considered using a microphone to write, that way you minimize your typing to editing and the like.
Wildebranch
Man, those Harem vibes. Kota better invest in some Management skill when puberty hits.
Sage Berthelsen
Someone changed the font. Evil munchkins.
Vanathor
The way the font size keeps getting messed with is beyond annoying. Is there a way to lock down the document without removing the ability to make suggestions?
rockus4
Nice chapter, a little breather from the bombshells of last one, wonder how long it would take for other villages to figure out what Kota is.
Slayer Anderson
A woman on either side and they're fighting over him. Kota: "Kill me." (slits throat with thumb) Stall Owner: "Shit out of luck kid." (laughs)
Kurlinni
Good chapter. But what was going on in this part. "I made eye contact with the stall owner again and discreetly reached up to scratch at my neck, running an extended thumb across it in a very distinct pattern. The old guy lurched with restrained laughter, snorting loudly and shaking his head as he turned away to prepare our food."
