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Winning Peace - Chapter 21

🕑 Added 2024-02-25 23:27:10 +0000 UTC

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Zerak

I love the mimetic hazard, as it really fit with what you were going with for the Last Dogs. And he can’t avoid being the emperor of humanity, or at least a permanent member of government that has veto rights since they are not alone.

Slayer Anderson

I wasn't really aware of Orion's Arm prior to people posting in this story's thread. So I'm trying to limit my meta. That said, the memetic hazard is only part of the picture with the revelation of the ME setting. It's not only about fixing the problem, it's about making humanity competitive with the Citadel races now.

Foufa

Orions Arm technology can help all of this. They deal with mimetic hazards and different modes of consciousness all the time

CallOut4

Not if the Asari actually use Prothein AI...

Lictor Magnus

Thanks for the chapter and the decision to condense everything. Considering this story usually updates once a month when I read it would take 10 chapters that sounded like a year 😅

David Hedges

I don't think that is a good idea. Arbitrarily changing canon details in the middle of a story willy-nilly isn't good for the believability of a story. It just reeks of the authors hand rather than something organic to the setting. Do such things enough times and people stop caring about the conflicts because it is all obvious author BS changing things around. If this was part of the base premise like "Enhanced humans with Inspired Inventor vs enhanced Mass Effect" then it wouldn't be too bad, but changing things after they have already been established in the readers' minds isn't good.

Alex McGregor

Good Stuff

godUsoland

Thanks for the chapter! I didn't see it coming so soon. Looks like the MC is burning out, but discovering this is Mass Effect is turning it all around! Will you make the Reapers more of a threat, or will they stay where they currently are at? Because with a Humanity led by the MC and a few Decades, they will blow the Council out of the water! Really, it'll be population size and a lack of settled planets that would hold Humanity back if anything from being a rival to even the Protheans. What route will the MC go down for humanity now that he is no longer holding back? With Inspired Inventor, there are so many tech routes Humanity could progress down. Hell, it'd be cool if he could invent a rival to Biotics for all of Humanity to gain access to. Imagine them using something like the CADs from "Irregular at Magic Highschool" or the Magic Apps from "UQ Holder"!

Ryune

Glad to see we're finally getting into the real meat of the story! And hey! Mechs are a core part of transhumanism. Just a matter of scaling up from full mechanical sleeves at the end of the day!

arkking

Great chapter. Maybe you can make the human into the ancient humans of halo. Taller smarter and stronger humans.

Slayer 10321

I would really love if the Citadel races in this AU had full access to a complete Prothean Archive and by the time Humanity meets them, has already surpassed the Prothean Empire. Would serve as a nice curveball to the MC. Awesome update though, otherwise. I really enjoyed it.

Guilherme Bezerra

Loved this resolution. I suppose it really is time to take the gloves off and go full freaking transhuman. It is either that or just nuke the species out of mercy. Damn but this is one horrible decision. The MC really need some anime style love and care. Maybe make him some Android waifus ?

CallOut4

So will our boys be facing game version of the Reapers or the more realistic 1 billion years of experience and tech variety Reaper...not to mention, do we really have to fight the Reapers?

Slayer Anderson

As the mass of new charges should imply, there will be a short time skip next chapter.

Austin

Love this story


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