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Winning Peace - Chapter 28

🕑 Added 2024-04-25 11:30:42 +0000 UTC

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Guilherme Bezerra

I suppose this chapter starts to answer what could oppose a fully ready Inspired Inventor character with access to the full scope of his abilities. The answer is the kind of opposition that no amount of Tech can hope to challenge in the timeframe available. An AI species that has been around for billions of years certainly fits the bill. Right now his greatest asset is the fact nobody knows he exists and has access to tech nobody ever dreamed up was possible. I have the distinct impression this Mass Effect Verse would never have had a chance to use the playbook from Canon. And it seems Ezequiel is already orienting Humanity towards a specific scenario. I find it extra amusing that he did not want to do it but was all but forced to prepare his species in multiple ways. He has for all intents and purposes founded Cerberus himself and is going to make the original Illusive Man look like a child compared to his plans. I love it.

Slayer Anderson

For some reason those slip past both my word processor and gdocs, but my betas catch them. They get fixed on the doc and will be fixed on the QQ public post, but altering patreon posts is a pain. I've already seen to the ones you've pointed out, thanks though.

PbookR

I agree with you on the consumer side of Comcast, their business support (particularly if you are dealing with fiber) is pretty good but even there I’ve headed out to meet a tech and shown up to have missed an email while traveling canceling the appointment…. As far as the chapter goes I enjoyed it, you did have one rogue t “t he” rather than the which makes me wonder if t is in your spell check by itself for some reason (since the same thing occurred last chapter).

Zerak

What’s wrong with Comcast? Also my 2 cents on things is it’s a good idea to identify himself as human but a separate entity from the human race/government. Because once humans make first contact people will seek him out regardless.

Heggs

Boy, the Batarians being an actual Council race is... concerning. Between all the other shit this fic's humanity does that would spook the Council and the Batarians being the Batarians I figure war is probably inevitable and it wouldn't be as short and tidy as ME canon's first contact war. Looking forward to the carnage!

gaouw ganteng

Damn Blakist. They even managed to reach into the distant past. --- OTOH, the hype is getting even more real. Thank you for the update. Keep up the great work.

Nick

An interesting set of changes. Many Mass Effect fics, especially ones with an overpowered protagonist, have the problem that there often a clear right answer for any problem, especially if everything happens the same way as the game. By changing so many things, it restores some of the moral ambiguity that I find interesting about the series.

UnlimitedLikes

Did the temple of palaven get them all?

Slayer Anderson

You'll have to wait and see what's up with them. I will confirm they're still around, though.

godUsoland

Thanks for the chapter! So, what happened to the Turians? Did they all die out when the War happened, did the Turians not do enough and are still considered an Allied/Neutral Race, or is the Council made up of 4 Seats now?

suspiciouscoffee

If it makes you feel any better, my area was served by Time Warner before Comcast showed up. The availability of internet is to the point we use Comcast as a verb to mean 'disconnected' and it has been especially bad recently with 5-8 hours a day of "maintenance".

Evilhippy

Huh, he's building some good karma in this one.


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