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Mind Games - Chapter 13

🕑 Added 2025-01-26 09:11:56 +0000 UTC

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Slayer Anderson

Missions got flushed and replaced with the revelation that he wasn't in canon, but a potentially-heavy AU. Glad you're enjoying it!

Håvard Grana Eriksen

I know this is a bit late, but didnt shinso mention earlier that he could get 50 Credits per year while he was at UA if he didnt indulge in vigilatism? Or does that only start when he actually attende UA? Love your writing, keep it up!

Zerak

Man that councillor he visited as a child is getting fucked.

Pi

Go, Untested Quirk Excuse! With the guy with finger quirk, at first I thought it was 'rip off' as in 'rip and tear', not as in 'scam', so he was pulling up parking meters.

Zeffre Kobernuss

Wow yeah Shinzo definitely comes across as someone who had one aspect of his quirk labeled villainous and then was browbeat into never learning anything else about what is evidently to others an incredibly versatile quirk with brainwashing being likely one small part of it. Anyway I’m definitely digging the vibe he’s got were he’s so incredibly competent but he’s got a tragic backstory that meant he had to be that competent to get through it all.

Templar9999

Given the set up in this chapter, you have already set the door to have the MC's quirk reclassified well. As eidetic memory and understanding language both fall under general esper like abilities. Well done.

shabbybook

This is my favorite story because of the slice of life stuff and easily understood goals and limitations

Skrubstar

Woo Mind Games! Looking forward to seeing Quirk based acting, and I really like the way you’ve fleshed out both Insurance, Movers, and general heroism. Overall, has to be up there with favorite MHA fics because it’s not confined to hitting the plot points but rather fleshing out the world and its implications.

Slayer Anderson

You underestimate the WTF quotient of sudden violence, even with seasoned heroes. He’ll get off at least one or two more punches.

Anonymous Daniel

The other hero currently in the room with him will undoubtedly interfere with his current attempt at taking down this villain. At least to the point where the company could claim he didn't manage it as a vigilante.

Slayer Anderson

I mean, who says that’s not going to happen?

Anonymous Daniel

Hmm... I feel like it would have been funnier if maybe shinso had planted himself and Judo thrown the insect uncle when he threw that punch. As a sort of way to show his expertise in physical combat and to differentiate between his female form and himself.

Slayer Anderson

The issue is more native vs foreign magic bullshit. Foreign is more noticeable.

Slayer Anderson

Controlled version.

Anonymous Daniel

So your going to turn into a girl when splashed with cold water and have that cold water attraction they have? Or is it a controlled version of that curse?

Magus-4-Hire

Yes, because Quirks aren't weird magic bullshit at all. 😜

Slayer Anderson

Ranma Saotome Template.

Sumgai101

Wait, is the MC running around using a charm to appear as the supposed vigilante girl? The pro heroes are definitely going to be scratching their heads when all the leads go nowhere

Guilherme Bezerra

Damn good chapter. So the MC is doing a bit of Vigilantism for a mission and his Exalted power comes for a homerun there since siderals are absurdly powerful in such roles. And now I can't really see him escaping this situation without a more complete Quirk assessement done. Time for some more bullshit lol.

Murica-Man

Makes sense given the sheer number of X genes involve other dimensions.

Slayer Anderson

Lunge, got it in the doc. Along with another few mistakes one of my late-comer beta readers picked up.

Sumgai101

>There was a lung, the vigilante moved, Wow, already with the organ gore? Or did they suffer an Asian criminal escapee from Brockton Bay?

Slayer Anderson

X-genes are off the table ATM. They're too close to weird magic bullshit that something might be able to hone in on them Better safe than sorry. Good idea, though, and it did cross my mind once or twice.

Evilhippy

Yeah, fuck that bastard up!

Bookmaggot

Loved the chap! Looking forward to more.

Einar Strandberg

Ooo, explaining it as "I automatically pick up the language someone is speaking when they respond" actually makes perfect sense. He could have limited it to just getting understanding, but pushing it to include speaking as will let him use languages more broadly. He'll probably have to sit down and plan out what he wants to initially explain with his quirk when he gets a full assessment. Fortunately quirks are supposed to get stronger as you use them, so him developing better mental capabilities over time can also be explained.

Murica-Man

Just as an idea he should consider grabbing a template stack of cypher from the xmen, as it would allow his understanding of body language to apply to non humanoids as well as allow him to understand basically all forms of information. If he does this you could write his quirk of as something along the lines of weaponized communication.

Nathan

Great Chappy 💪🐸


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