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Mind Games - Chapter 21

🕑 Added 2025-03-30 03:44:56 +0000 UTC

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Skrubstar

More Mind Games woo! Struggling with the classic, discussing your Alternate Identity while not trying to make it too obvious to guide what people think. Also yeah if Fuyumi had a bad time with Shinso, Toga’s gonna be a bad time. Also like the tie in between Enhanced Blood, and Cat Instincts to fit the blood donations, and wonder if her Sister inherited the other bits. Maybe something internal enhancements with how she changed her eyes for more details, as opposed to Toga who changes her external appearance.

Slayer Anderson

Comparatively short, yes. But that's how the cookie crumbles, sometimes. It was still almost 3.5k words long.

god of war

That had to be a short chapter right?? I'm not the only one that thought this one felt extra short? 🥲

Sumgai101

>“An unreasonable request?” >"More of a permission thing, really." >"..." >"Your daughters ha-" *flambed*

Slayer Anderson

The abrupt shift was meant to be a stylistic choice on my part, but my beta-reader has belatedly talked me into changing it. So, if you consider that an error it's 'fixed' in the doc.

Sage Berthelsen

New Ron!

Tony Martin

Does Patreon sometimes eat formatting? There is zero indication we are changing scenes. He was talking with icy hot and the very next line was him knocking on the door.

Fabhar

Delighted to see more of this. Fingers crossed the next one is more Mind Games, especially with the psuedo-cliff of what the MC wants to discuss with Endeavor at the end of this chapter.


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