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🕑 Added 2025-03-08 05:58:33 +0000 UTC

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mz304

Could be slightly faster but the detail is what makes this worth it for me

Michael Friede

On the one hand, I agree with the pacing being an issue. On the other hand, I absolutely love the worldbuilding you’ve been doing since day one. The world feels lived in and real, in a way cannon doesn’t. Theres also a lot that’s been accomplished in a single summer. So the plot is moving, just differently. I also really like the Tournament being much more important than in canon. So, yes maybe speed up the pace a little but otherwise you’re doing great!

Hadrian v.E.

Yep. The story should've moved along A LOT faster. ~150 chapters and (what) 0.5M words covering just 2 months of events are not anywhere near reasonable. I remember giving this criticism (on FFN) all the way back during the Anastasia arc. The TWT year actually needs time to develop with so much going on, but I sincerely hope you don't drag things out anymore.


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