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Chapter 47 - Bonding
🕑 Added 2024-11-25 14:00:16 +0000 UTCThe next three days passed in a blur for Alex. In part, this was due to his busy schedule, but largely due to his lack of sleep and the absence of stamina potions.
Master Shen moved on to a new form of sweeping strikes that used the Flowing Water stance to slash as he moved. It was mesmerizing for Alex to watch the forms demonstrated by the sword master. He had an entirely new appreciation for the detail that went into martial arts. The new form was called Dragonfly Touches the Water. Some of the cuts also included quick flicks of his wrist toward vital points, and Alex was unsure if the form would work at all if it weren’t for a stat-enhanced body.
Eura and Master Shen Rong had begun to work a portion of training meant to teach Alex how to infuse a sword with mana in case there was a magically oriented attack that needed to be blocked. However, when Alex demonstrated how easily he could complete this with [Mana Infusion], they quickly let him move on.
Alex had been curious about something since his sparring match a few days prior and decided to present his theory to Eura.
“I think it should be possible for me to make my Mana Threads manifest in the physical world. It clearly happened when I used the binding ritual during the sparring match, and I saw the Mana Spinners do it regularly. Do you know how I could make this happen?”
Eura rubbed his smooth chin for a moment before smiling at Alex. “I think I might, but I think it would be best for you to figure it out. Continue your drilling with Master Li and Master Shen, but during our lesson time, I want you to try to solve this question on your own. If you need resources, ask me, and I’ll get them for you. Also,” Eura paused and reached behind his desk to lift a small package. “This is for you. Think of it as a gift for being a devoted student.”
Alex had opened the box and was surprised to find a Basic Rituals Manual and two Advanced Rituals Manuals. His mouth dropped open, and he looked at Eura, speechless.
“Eh,” Eura waved his hand. “It’s nothing. I sent for the books more than a week ago. It just had to come down from one of our branch sects in the mountains.”
“Eura, thank you. This is huge,” Alex said. He thought of how much progress in his magic he’d been able to make with a single manual and dedicated study. The thought of having more advanced materials to study without spending a ton of Mana Stones excited him.
As he looked down at the manuals, Alex noted the rest of the statement. He asked Eura about how large the area of the light side of the Rift was. Eura contemplated for a few moments before stating it was the size of a small continent, and the same went for the dark side of the Rift. Alex was stunned, unable to believe that the Rift was so large. Up until that point, he’d really only thought of Tianluo as the main hub of the light side of the Rift, not bothering to go any deeper into the landmass.
Well, my goal this entire time has been to get out of the damn place. I’m not sure why I’d want to go any deeper in…
“Alright, enough stalling. I’ve got work to do here. Go and begin your tests.”
Alex groaned but felt excited about diving deeper into [Mana Threads], which had quickly become his favorite skill. He spent the next two days devoting all of his attention to the threads and attempting to figure out a way to manifest them into the physical plane. He put aside the training that he’d been doing with [Mirage] and even the idea of studying the advanced ritual materials that Eura presented him with.
While he loved the work and ideas Eura had given him the previous week for [Mirage], Alex felt that he was missing something there. He believed it was just that the options with illusion magic were so broad; he could do many things with it, and he just didn’t have the time in his limited days to experiment as much as he might like. Illusion magic required a subtly that came from hours of dedicated practice and experimentation.
There was even more practical application for it if he took Val into consideration. The mana wyrm’s [Create Lesser Illusion] could be used at the same time as [Mirage] to compound the illusion or to further divert someone’s attention. Alex had toyed with the idea of using Val for an anchor that he could attach a [Mirage] of himself to, then allow the companion to move around and direct the illusory Alex.
The illusions always seem to work better if I have something to anchor them to.
Just as he had the thought, Alex sat bolt upright. Sam, who was nearby, looked over at him and tilted his head.
“Something to anchor it to! That’s it!”
Alex got up and walked over to a small sandy area of the garden. He scooped some of the sand into his hand and pushed a mana thread through it. At first, nothing happened, but as Alex sent more mana through the thread, he could see it lighting up, and after a few seconds, he could feel the thread brushing against his fingertips.
He exclaimed and jumped while pumping his fist in the air.
Sam laughed at him from somewhere else in the garden.
Alex sent a thread weaving through the garden plants until he found Sam and lightly touched his [Mana Thread] to the leaking mana that Sam had coming form his body. This let him establish a sort of pseudo-link where Alex could project thoughts but not hear them, at least not until Sam allowed him to.
Hey, I hear you over there.
Alex smirked as he heard Sam yelp in surprise.
Do you realize that I’m literally like one step away from being Spiderman?
His smirk grew into a grin as he heard Sam begin to laugh loudly and without care. He broke off the connection and felt a sense of happiness just from making Sam laugh.
Alex walked over to Eura and gave a brief report, glad that he was able to solve the problem in a small window of time.
“Great job, you figured that out quickly. I’ll give you one hint for your next step. Test different materials.”
Alex’s brain immediately began to try and process the hint, thinking of all the different materials that might give his mana a good source to latch on to.
“Think about it another time,” Eura said. “You are exhausted. I can see the bags under your eyes. You need to go get some sleep.”
“But-”
“No. I need to go take care of something urgent anyway. You need sleep. You’ve been doing this for almost three weeks straight. It’s clearly catching up with you. Go rest.” Eura looked over to Sam, “Samuel, please make sure that Alex gets to rest. He sorely needs it.”
Sam flinched at the sound of his name but then nodded as he realized what Eura was asking.
A short time later, Alex crashed into his low bed on wooden slats and fell asleep within moments.
He wasn’t sure of when it happened, but at some point in the night, Alex awoke with a start. He looked around in the dark, his right eye completely useless. His left eye, however, saw an explosion of greens and yellows surrounding him in their small room.
Alex called out in alarm, unsure if they were under attack by a spell. It took him a few moments to realize that there was a form seated on the floor next to him. After Alex yelled, the beautiful green mana surrounding the figure and his bed retracted, and he saw the figure flinch through his mana sight.
“Sam? Is that you?”
Alex used his left eye to analyze the figure and saw that it was Sam. He saw the vague outline of the mana leaking from the boy's body, so it was a surprise to see the boy huff as if annoyed and then extend a tendril of mana to talk.
Reaching out with his own thread of mana, Alex connected to the mental communication, projecting caution and curiosity.
Sam, what are you doing? What time is it?
Sam sent back feelings of annoyance and frustration. Completely caught off guard, Alex didn’t even think to stop the boy as he reached forward and flicked Alex on the forehead.
Half asleep and stunned, Alex began to laugh.
Guess you’re feeling a bit more confident around me, huh?
Sam sent back feelings of smug satisfaction before the of a parent giving a child a command. That last feeling was accompanied by a mental impression of Alex sleeping.
Alright, I’ll go back to bed. Just tell me what you’re doing first?
Rather than send feelings, Sam shared another part of his Status Window that he hadn’t shown Alex before.
{Nature’s Refuge} - When at peace, the Awakened manifests an ethereal domain of nature around themselves. The Refuge will increase the Vitality and natural regeneration of those within its embrace.
Wow, that’s actually really awesome for your other ability, Sam. Is that why you’ve been practicing meditation so much while I’m training?
Alex saw Sam’s head nod through the mana outline. It made sense to Alex, and he thought it was a smart choice. He couldn’t help but think that Sam might have a hard time finding peace in most moments, though, after his rough experience here in the Rift, he seemed to be skittish with most things.
Sam let some guilt leak through, clearly noticing where Alex’s thoughts were going.
Alex sent back the feeling of a pat on the head and the comfort that came with his companionship with Val.
It’s alright, buddy. We’ll get through this.
Alex could tell through their connection that Sam wanted to share something more, so he waited and didn’t push the boy.
Sam sent through the feelings of desire and trust, while showing Alex his full Status Window.
Part of Alex wanted to reprimand the teenager again, telling him that he shouldn’t share such things. He took a deep breath and could feel the unwavering trust Sam put into him and he decided not to say anything.
Fine, but this is the only way to make it fair. Make sure to keep this a secret, alright?
Alex pulled up his own Status Window and willed for it to be visible to the naked eye. He saw Sam stiffen, and then a feeling of awe came through the link as he looked at Alex’s window.
A feeling of pride and satisfaction coursed through Alex, and he smiled. He looked through Sam’s abilities and his class, noting the great synergy that Sam had. He was impressed with the choices that the boy had made, especially in the desperate situation he’d been placed in.
Alex sent through his own feelings of impressed admiration when he saw that Sam had is own world-first title for being the first human from their world to enter an Epic Rank Rift.
Sam closed up a bit at the mention of his entrance into the Rift, but at some gentle encouragement, he sent back an embarrassed smile and shrug.
After a bit more back and forth and getting a better understanding of Sam’s abilities, Alex started to understand how Sam had progressed while in the Rift. He’d gotten his Trait in a mad dash and accidental kill against a monster in the Rift. While he was injured he’d managed to gain a healing ability from his knowledge of herbs and an instinctual understanding of mana sensitivity. That was how he received his first passive and first skill; when he combined those two things, he was able to get a healing skill as well, all within a few days of being in the Rift.
Alex had been interested to learn that as a healer, Sam gained experience by healing people. With the merchant continually making Sam heal, day in and day out, over his time in the Rift, Sam quickly became extremely high-leveled. Because he was forced to heal warriors who were fighting against the Shadow Serpent Sect, he’d been able to create another skill called [Cure], which helped him fight against poisons.
Even though it was difficult to get the boy to speak, he was able to piece the story together bit by bit. It often came down to him asking questions in the dark and waiting for certain responses from the teen through their link. Soon, the conversation died down, and Alex got ready to fall back asleep.
Do you want me to give you some of my mana?
Sam sent back a smug feeling and turned his upper body some more. Through his mana vision, Alex could see a blue coil of mana wrapped around Alex’s upper arm. He realized Val was taking a nap on his shoulder and infusing a slow trickle of mana into the boy.
Alex teared up and felt an overwhelming amount of gratitude toward the pair. They’d gone out of their way to help him recover even though he hadn’t asked for anything.
Fuck. You guys are gonna make me cry.
“Fuck?”
Alex and Sam both burst into laughter as Val lifted his head and entered the conversation.
A short time later, Alex was in a deep and restful sleep.
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Post Chapter Question for Patrons:
I only showed Sam's trait here {Nature's Refuge} though the story describes that his whole Status Screen was shown to Alex. My original thinking was that I didn't want to clutter up the screen with his entire Status Page, and likely wouldn't do that with other people's either throughout the story.
My main focus when showing Status Screens would be to stick to mostly just Alex and Valtherion with snippets or pieces of other peoples from when Alex uses Heavenly Eye and such.
Does it feel unsatisfying NOT to see it, though?
Would you want it to be in the chapter, even if you're not liking to see his screen again in the future?
Thank you guys for your feedback, reading along, and supporting the story!
Comments
Maximus
It is a very original feeling to just get the thoughts on the status and not the status itself. I find myself liking it. Therefore, you did well to omit it.
V L
I’m glad you didn’t show the whole thing. Worked fine.
Ron
Sam sent back feelings of smug satisfaction before the of a parent giving a child a command. **strike BEFORE THE **
Nathaniel Ownbey
You could also have it be that a portion of the screen is selected by the one showing it. They can show any part up to the full screen
Yeet Yeet
Slapping the status screen at the end of the chapter has worked in general, just make sure to clearly convey that its the end of the chapter (like how you separated the chapter from the post-chapter question).
Simon
While it's satisfying to see the numbers I wouldn't show them either unless they are in some way relevant to the story later on.
small_brain_boy
It does help it flow better with just the occasional full status of MC. Making a full status for other characters leads to you having so much more to keep up and removes your ability to be able to change anything later on if you feel like it.
ReadingObsessed
Not showing flowed better 👍
Vortha
I don't think it's necessary to show his window unless you think the minutia of his status window will be in some way relevant later on.
PWeygandt
Personally, I would love to see it. Even if it was just the basics plus skills and traits.
PWeygandt
I think that if you added a characters status into the end notes of a chapter then ppl could choose to view it or they could skip it if they are uninterested!
OverXelous
Maybe I can put it in the End Author's Note on RR or something? I'm just worried about overdoing it with screens or cluttering things up when it goes to pub. Thank you for your feedback. I appreciate it!
Chaoticgoose
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DarkLightZero8
Thanks for the chapter
DarkLightZero8
Would def like to see Sam’s status screen
OverXelous
Thanks for the feedback!
Kevin
Good call don’t show
