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Chapter 50 - The Eve of Battle

🕑 Added 2024-11-28 14:00:05 +0000 UTC

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OverXelous

HA! I didn't even think about that, definitely some parallels. Especially if you think about later when his Willpower gets even higher and he can analyze the flow of mana to an even higher degree. He'll definitely use it to study other kinds of magic... oh man, what have I done!

The Human

It just occurred to me reading this chapter when he touched his scar while thinking about his magical eye, gifted to him in a traumatic transplant by a trapped fighter, which can see energy and he will soon keep covered outside of combat/personal quests. ... Kakashi? Is that you?

V L

I have no rights to demand you write your story a certain way but plssss let Sam make it out of the rift alive omg.

V L

Jsyk if you kill Sam I’m leaving. Leaving. Forever. Probably. I’ll do it.

Ron

Rarity: Common T ype: One-Handed Short Sword **carriage return in wrong place **

OverXelous

Good catch, thank you!

small_brain_boy

I'm so ready to see his family's reaction to throwing magic around. Especially his dad and brother 😂

Daniel

lives yet to live = life yet to live

Elinar Godly

Two spelling mistakes to note. Master Li's last sentence: "You would serve us well.” I believe it should be "You would have served us well." Since he is talking about a hypothetical future that would not happen. Second one is in the text for the Jian, Rarity: Common T (T should be below) ype: One-Handed Short Sword And as always TFTC

Corwin

Well Alex can't hide what changes he went through so he is going to be outed. But he could help both friends Awaken without the danger if they wanted to.


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